Posted by Gypa 13 years ago Report

This story is very entertaining and well written al though I had some throubles with the names. :D Best one I have read in some time.

Posted by Gypa 13 years ago Report

This is defenetly one of the best stories I have read for long time. Although I had some throubles with the names. Probably because Im not Frankish but since Chrodechildis only eat three girls month, I do wonder what she does when there are more than three girls around her. Would see make an expectation to the rule are is her dad just making up the number to not scare the other king away? As I do feel by reading this story that Chrodechildis could eat more than three in month. I do feel that the unwilling part of the prisoners is because they don't speak same langue as Chrodechilds so they are only tied and forced because communication problems. Because Alfgiva is reaction is way to willing to me when Chrodechilds have confiremd to her that she would eat her. I think she wanted that all along secretly so I would have thought it was cooler if Chrodechilds had untied her to underline this point. But thats how I feel about this. I would have done more with this set up it sounds intresting.