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Just Another Birthday Party By Jag -- Report

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It's once again birthday party night and Jay and Steven are caught in the corner by both Wiese and Wings. The two horses allow themselves the pleasure of snacking on both bunny and human as everyone knows it's best to just enjoy a meal more filling than to try and fill up on party snacks.

Contains: M/m vore and sex, watersports, digestion, scat

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newenglandee

Posted by newenglandee 13 years ago Report

Okay, even if they're in the back of the room, this is a CROWDED birthday party and they just ate the guy celebrating said birthday...and NOBODY SAW ANYTHING? There's deus ex machina, there's leaps in logic, and then there's pulling stuff outta your ass!

Jag

Posted by Jag 13 years ago Report

Everyone knows about being eaten, it's almost expected to happen in my universe.

newenglandee

Posted by newenglandee 13 years ago Report

They're just okay with people being publicly murdered? I am SERIOUSLY confused. I mean, this is something most people would be freaked out over.

Jag

Posted by Jag 13 years ago Report

You obviously don't read many of my stories. Unless otherwise stated each and every character will usually come back to life after being digested. That is my universe.

newenglandee

Posted by newenglandee 13 years ago Report

Oh, well, that explains a few things. Out of curiosity, does this story take place in the same universe as the "Changed World" story?

Jag

Posted by Jag 13 years ago Report

It does not. Changed World was a commission piece for someone else. Most of those are separate pieces of work.

Shirehorse7

Posted by Shirehorse7 11 years ago Report

what a nice story there needs to be more stories of these guys