So. . . Tarik's pleading didn't seem to go so well. His time in the snake's nest ticked by. . . and Jaabir finally arrived.

The mouse had told the rat he'd have a chance of survival if the snake was successful in his hunt. . . maybe fate smiled on him? . . .

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