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The story starts with The Mother coming into the world under the guise of an Angel. Which the Vaticant is quick to pick up on.
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Posted by SparkyTheWolf 13 years ago Report
Ah, another great story from you :D
Posted by Firstfate 13 years ago Report
:D yep
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Just curious... how does the mother purify the corruption in the girls if she just mindwipes them? Does everybody secretly desire to serve her, if the changes are only what they desire?
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
The "corruption" The Mother is removing from the girls are the Brands which the Noblemen use to force the girls to do whatever the "Noblemen" want the girls too. So when The Mother frees them from said bonds, those girls are free to chose to do whatever they want, but what would you do with your freedom if you were known as a Nobleman's whore? You'd find the one person who would love you and do what "you" want to do and stay with that person regardless of what kind of monster they were on the "outside" (cause those girls know where the "real" monsters lurk :P)
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Ah, thank you for clarifying... might want to make that a little more evident in your stories, even if it's stuff that's backstory. It'll help make the Mother, and the world she's eating, that much more real and whole. I know the scenario is really meant to be a kinda fetish ful-fillment, but details like that help characterization and world building.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
This is an old story, and somewhere in the back of my mind, I'm certain I've repeatedly said that in stories of mine, but maybe not as "clearly" as in my previous comment.