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After being defeated and Rejected again by Mew Ichigo, Kish comes up to the conclusion that if he can't have her, no one will. And he's determined to do it by this way
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Posted by Kamelagram 13 years ago Report
Very well done, good flow and pacing... admittedly it went a bit fast for me, but you managed to give enough detail without bogging it down, plus managed to put a bit of story to build up to later chapters.
And while the second story path would be interesting, I would love to hear how the other mews will be presented to Pie and Tart.
Posted by Redwallfan2000 13 years ago Report
Thanks for the honset review. Looking back I did see some misspelled words but I can't undo that know.
So I have plenty ideas for the rest. The second path I MIGHT do in order to do other vore stories in this series.
Posted by LordStorm 13 years ago Report
I enjoyed it:) I have a weakness for cooked Catgirls after all:D Very nice!
Posted by Redwallfan2000 13 years ago Report
So, should I do more cooking of Mew Ichigo? If so what suggestions would you like me to cook her as?
Posted by LordStorm 13 years ago Report
I wouldent mind seeing more cooked Kitty;) for cooking suggestions...plenty of ways to cook a catgirl:) Boiled,steamed,Catgirl stew,catgirl scampi in white wine sauce, or the classic...Catgirl Pie:D
Posted by Redwallfan2000 13 years ago Report
Hmm, Boiled sounds good, she'd have to be in a pot of water...I'll do it, so who'd should be the Pred this time Mew Zakuro?