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Phew, and finished, this will be the last part of TDD, I hope you all enjoyed it :)
Edit: Dollista belongs to her respective owner gosoxtim.
Everyone else belongs to me :)
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Posted by acrylic 13 years ago Report
nice story
Posted by Firstfate 13 years ago Report
Thank you ^.^
Posted by vintious 13 years ago Report
Got around to finishing it, wasn't really my thing, but at this point, I'm reading your stuff for just the story -_-
Posted by Firstfate 13 years ago Report
Thank you! I usually try to incorporate an indepth story in with all the fetishes I involve with my stories. Cause reading about some girl being eaten in the same way again and again gets boring, so the story usually makes things better :)
Posted by GUEST19216 12 years ago Report
i laughed my ass off when i read the part about Cassy being a doll, and then Dollista's reaction
Posted by Firstfate 12 years ago Report
Priceless isn't it :)
Posted by GUEST19216 12 years ago Report
YESH!!!!
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Lovely series and ending. I'm happy that Cassy found a way to live happily with Dollista, and... mmmm... inside her pussy most of the time! Really need to write more long term endo vore/unbirth myself, but it's cute and sexy that Dollista keeps her there.
I do see now throughout the series that Dollista reacts very very strongly to threats to her dolls and children she likes... but, well... that's the thing. Mostly I saw her hunting all the time, not really 'playing' with her dolls. Even sexually, I think I would've understood her and her dolls better if there was a scene that gave a sense of how she showed her love to the dolls and the souls in them, and how much they loved her for it. Like, maybe when Dollista was being Cassy's 'nanny', she could have played with the dolls with the girl, showing she knew what kinda tea they liked at a tea party, or revealing that she hugged or swallowed them a lot to keep them warm. Mention that she was 're-habilitating' Cassy's doll sisters, and maybe a few of the dolls actually apologizing for treating Cassy and Dollista so badly when they were alive. Have them say that Dollista showed them more love as dolls then they got from their parents.
Little things for heartwarming, and now that I know her better, it's a shame that we never saw them.
I still like the series as is though. nice encroaching horror, and sex. I like the epilouge in the last chapter alot as well, giving the world a lot of detailed hope. thanks for listening to my stupidly long nitpicks.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
It doesn't both me, cause I left you long rambling responses :P and as for showing more of the stuff happening in the "background".... I sometimes just get rushed to finish a story before I lose interest in it so I end up cutting out stuff like that, plus my mood shifts constantly, so one day I may want to write about cuddly and mushy stuff, then the next day I'm only interested in mercilessly beating up people in pvp video games :/
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Ah, now that explains everything. The muse is a fickle girl.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Believe me, if I could tame that brat... I'd be able to write more often than I do now, and I might even be able to work on stories not related to The Mother in any way >.>