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This story is the first one I've ever done with anal vore. I was never comfortable with it because I couldn't come up with some kind of logic to it. I hope it works. I must have written hundreds of pages about these two characters that I deleted and re-wrote. They still exist in the context of the world I've imagined. Normally one has to be recruited or have a sponsor to become a pred. Leslie and Susan were forced into it by someone who stole secrets and decided that vore was great entertainment. That kind of makes a lot of sense. The ability to perform anal vore wasn't intentional on the part of the ones who kidnapped Leslie and Susan. They had another kind of entertainment in mind so I had to find a way not to go crazy with it. I use scat because it's unavoidable in my mind. My girls eat more so... I just didn't want it to take over the entire story.
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Posted by bela 13 years ago Report
"“We just want you guys to know that you also smell delicious." Hilarious, entertaining, sexy. The characters' everyday politeness somehow makes the outrageous seem possible and even real. Yikes!
Posted by printz 13 years ago Report
Thank you very much. I think you're probably the first one to see into my mind like that. The preds tend to think of it as something normal for everyone. It's the right thing for a pred to do so why should she be ashamed of it? It is her family after all. She was kind enough to introduce the guys that she and her pred friend were going to eat. All in all, it's just a family get together. No one should have a problem understanding that some people just have special dietary needs. You and I know these people are completely nuts but at least they're concerned with being politely nuts. It isn't a nice thing that Billy likes to tease his sister and her friend about their talent for anal vore but that's what brothers are for I guess. I think Leslie secretly wishes that Susan would eat Billy. The family should understand. It's what preds do so it must be perfectly O.K.