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I kinda feel bad about not posting much lately... especially when I'm overflowing with inspiration from my lady.
So, here's this -
It's pretty much the literary version of the classic maw shot. Short, sweet, to the point.
More or less a true (and recurring) story.
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Posted by prisoner 12 years ago Report
Your thread made it sound interesting, but I can't get past the point of view. Anytime I see "me", "my", etc I start thinking of the writer and it freaks me out. "Your" is tolerable. Just personal preference though.
Posted by Bright 12 years ago Report
It would be a bit easier to read if there were some more space in those paragraphs.