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Heyo,
This is based on one of the captioned pictures I did, "Black Widows" - I felt like there was a lot more story there to explore.
I think it's a little more horror-esque than my other writing so far - some influences of IT and Cowslip's warren from Watership down.
I would like to draw attention to my Patreon:
www.patreon.com/misterthirteen
I only do payouts when I submit stories - not pictures - and that's once a month, tops. I'll do a payout for this story once it's finished.
I'm actually going through a period of some financial hardship right now, so if anyone would like to become a patron before I do a payout in the near/indefinite future, even if you cancel it after one time, that would be REALLY appreciated. The less I'm worrying about money, the more time I can relax and put into making silly vore stuff.
Thank you!
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Posted by HeftyRubberHusky 5 years ago Report
The good ol' "lost a ball over the fence" device. A classic!
In all seriousness, I liked this piece! It's a nice little snippet that isn't too long and isn't too short! I think it being more "horror-esque" is a nice way of putting it. You can get an overall sense of suspense from Tara's interactions with Maya; like a spider getting closer to a fly caught in its web.
That and, the fact that it is implied about what happens to Maya, as opposed to explicitly showing or telling it. The "your imagination makes it worse" idea is handled nicely!
The short ending paragraph is the nice icing on the cake. The fact that Maya's established clothing is found, along with the ball. Almost like something from a crime scene, neatly combined with its horror tones.
Posted by cruddneck 2 years ago Report
Would love to see this continue!