Posted by Kyiiri 12 years ago Report

Very nice.~ :3

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

thank you kindly ^-^

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

.............. you got closer didnt you?

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "He did."

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

oh...right...he cant breath... *takes a few steps back* well silly move on his part >.>

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "He couldn't breath but don't worry hes in a better place." ^-^

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

.....not sure how i missed that bulge earlier .....or the fact that nothings protruding from under your tail now. Well guess that works for both of ya <.<

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

-she nods happily-

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

and question, what happened to your clothes....or do you just not wear them? ^._.>

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "...Clothes?"

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

Either that was sarcasm of the answer to my question, not 100% sure which <.<;;

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "I'm..not sure what 'clothes' are..."
Me: *laughing inside her butt*

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

Still not clearing anything up but atleast someones entertained >.>

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Me:"shes not too fond of clothes"
Sarah: "i could of said that" >.< *she sucks me in deeper no longer able to be heard*

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

*ears flick* did....he manage to wiggle back out or was he not all the way in to begin with?^._.>

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "when i split my focus my grip isn't as tight but dont worry" *clenches* "he wont be doing that again ;P"

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

X3 well my apologies for taking your attention away from your toy who appears to be causing a notable bulge in your large intestine

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "oh thats only temporary ^-^"

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

o.o''''''''''' well you're only getting half the fun then

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Sarah: "hmm.."-she smiles at you- "Care to volunteer then" ;3

Posted by Anotherkitsune 12 years ago Report

That.....was not what i was implying, to quote the rocky horror picture show call back for the time warp "in and out, in and out, thats what sex (or rather in this case AV) is all about" >.>;;;;

Posted by StalkOBroccoli 12 years ago Report

your really gettin better!

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

either that or luckier ;D

Posted by momonari 12 years ago Report

Very nice !!!! Looks awesome !!! I love hoe the head looks now !! you gave the right proportions to the face foreead and upper face !!! =) good going !!! Very well drawn left arm !! and her butt looks incredible !!! Also love the shape you're giving to the face now !!! and a nice work on the tail too *Claps* Truly remarkable !!

Now for the feedback:

1) The boobs are too high on her chest women's boobs start forming below their armpits, never at the neck example: http://images.wikia.com/metroid/es/images/5/5f/Zero_suit_samus_by_wavedashdoc_sinfondoblanco.png

I undestand it's a little harder here to use the armpit rule as the angle didn't require you to draw the armpit but in those cases you should calculate where the armpit would be so you can start the boob's fall from there

2) The right outline of the back is not curved enough; it's too straight, you should probably have done a sexy inward curve; and then make it outward like and upside down question mark example: http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/clubs/15/134874.jpg

The human body has NO straight lines, not even one !!! It doesn't matter the angle
The only exception to this rule is the frontal part of a shin bone when you draw a side view (the shin bone is the one of the lower leg the one that REALLY hurts when someone kicks you there)
And women's bodys are even more curvy than men's remember that golden rule for drawing people: NO STRAIGHT LINES !! (except for the one exception I just said)

3) Her neck is too long, specially for that angle, it should be only 1/3 of the size it is now, that means it should be 3 times shorter; even for a front view it should be only half that long. Let's see this picture again (it's almost the same angle so it's very usefull): http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/clubs/15/134874.jpg

Can you see her neck at all ??? Maybe a little if that thread of hair wasn't on the way but that's very little neck

4) Finally: her tongue is too small, I see what happened here: you drew her mouth almost frontal view and then tried to draw the tongue on side view but even from the side the tongue should always be thick enough cover her whole lower lips here's an example of a tongue from a similar angle: http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1615093

I think this is your best work so far !!! I love it and it's very sexy !!! You've gotten a lot better and when I look at your pictures I can see you're taking my advices =) !! I hope you keep practicing and getting better, I'll keep reviewing you on your works like this to give you a little extra speed !! so keep it up !!! =)

Favorited !!!!

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

of course I want your advice so i can improve :3 you give really good ideas and pics to help! if it wasn't for you and stalk i wouldn't have come this far :D (not to mention everyone who likes my work)Your advice/support is always welcome :) and i always look forward to hear how you like my newer stuff

Posted by leonskenedi 12 years ago Report

OWo!! awesome

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

thanks ^-^

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

Hey Sarah, a good rule of thumb: if in doubt... use lube. XD

Very nice, Neku. Your box expression is quite a chuckle. =D

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

i thought it was when in doubt shove it in harder XD or atleast thats what she thought o3o

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

Well... that is another school of thought, Neku.
I guess you could force a square peg into a round hole. XD

However... (finished joke on next pic)

Posted by NecrolanceZX 12 years ago Report

Heh... If it's too tight for him I'd gladly take his place, I'm durable enough~

At first the art style of some earlier pics put me off, but it's growing on me. Pretty nice regardless~

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

well i work hard on these regardless of the shotty work but I do want to get better and i really hope to have you as a future watcher and really really like when people comment on my work ^-^ i thank you immensely

Posted by NecrolanceZX 12 years ago Report

Not a problem. I do understand that some people are more advanced in drawing than others, I hope you get even better and draw some sexy AV with her :P

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

thats my goal :D