Posted by Kyiiri 12 years ago Report

You are getting better every time you load a new picture it seems.

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Thanks ^-^ I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought that X3

Posted by StalkOBroccoli 12 years ago Report

seconded.

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

lolwut?

Posted by StalkOBroccoli 12 years ago Report

i was agreeing with kyiiri! XD

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

thanks! ^-^ you Momonari and Kyiiri are who keep me going! and wanting to get better :3

Posted by Silver Wolf 12 years ago Report

Thirded..whatever, I was about to say the same exact thing, I'm enjoying these more and more with each new upload. You're getting better

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

yay! glad to have so many new commenters!! ^-^ your comment and support are greatly appreciated thank you!

Posted by momonari 12 years ago Report

Alright !!! excellent !! the hair looks very good, obeys gravity and hangs from stuff like shoulders and head in a very natural lookig way !! Love how you drew that angle !!! her neck is the right leght too !!! LOVE the ass !! and the starting place of the fall of the boobs is perfect this time !!!! congrats !! the mini you looks fine too ... your shoelaces are untied by the way.
The face looks awesome I know I say this every time, but everytime I say it it's true: This is your best work so far !!!

But there's always room for improvement so here's my feedback for you:

1) The vagina: in this angle and with her legs toghether we shouldn't be able to see it at all, it's better off not drawn ; from between the 2 buttcheeks lower curve it starts moving towards the front passing between the two legs , not over the right leg

2)Her asshole is a little too high and facing too much to the back: Basing on the assumption neku is being anal vored I see the place where the asshole is not completely correct: the asshole should be in the place where you drew the index finger nail (the one closest to the vagina) that's where her asshole would be.

3) Her left boob is defying gravity and drawn in the wrong point of view: we shouldd't be able to see the nipple: her chest is facing to her front but you drew the boobs as if it were a sideview; I agree the arm reaching back makes us able to see the boob, but the nipple would still be facing front and falling down, so we'd just see the round mound of the back side of her left boob here.

4) Her left arm is too long and foreqrm too short: if you remove the shoulder and the wrist the arm and forearm should be the same size: try grabbing your right shoulder with your right hand and you'll understand.

5) THE HANDS !!!!! Yea, the toughest trial for artists !!! we all struggle there before actually drawing the hand always look at how yours would look in that position and angle. Her pinky looks just a little big and her middle and index just a little smaller than they should be: the problem is that in hands a little makes all the difference. The only way I've found when it comes to drawing hands is sketching.

6) the three little curves below her boob on the left side: Very nice touch and very nice idea but I think you exagerated with 3 lumps, it makes her look kinda fat, 2 curves would fare better I think =)

Everything else looks fantastic, and It's a very sexy picture !!! Faved !!

Posted by Kyiiri 12 years ago Report

It is amazing how helpful Monomari is, hopefully we will be seeing some more of your stuff soon, too!~

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Monomari is super helpful ^-^!!

Posted by momonari 12 years ago Report

Thanks !! I try =P

Posted by NotherPacman 12 years ago Report

Would you like my two cents?

It is grainy.

The lineart is so grainy that even though your pictures are interesting enough to click on, the sketchy lines make me think unkind things about your work.

Maybe a graphics editor could clear this up. I'm currently trying to draw, and am using GIMP (is multiplatform).

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Lol i can't really do anything the 3DS can only handle so much :\ sorry if my work bothers you...

Posted by meloveu 12 years ago Report

lol i love your cardboard box head!
Great work, your getting better everytime i see your work, just remember to keep it coloured and show a little more detail in her anus!

:p

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

heh thanks i will ^-^

Posted by NotherPacman 12 years ago Report

Don't worry, it doesn't bother me. I was just making a suggestion.

I forgot about the 3DS lol. ^^

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

Thanks :) I'm sorry i think i missread your comment heh ^-^; and I'm just doing what is the most comfortable for me (i've been doing that kinda sketchy line thing since i was young) so its been kinda 'my thing' for like ever XD. but I'm very greatful for your comment and your suggestion and i really look forward to hearing from you in the future :)

Posted by NotherPacman 12 years ago Report

Yeah I don't mean to think unkind thoughts about your work.
I mean your art causes me to think "messy" or whatever, but not unkind thoughts.

Anyway thanks for your gratitude. ^_^

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

I could see that :p but i always dug this art style lol its all i had X3

Posted by NecrolanceZX 12 years ago Report

Wonder if there's room for more... ;P

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

...She might be feelin’ this the morning... XD

http://www.featurepics.com/FI/Thumb300/20090623/Mi
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Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

hahahaha XD idk dat ass is pretty strong o3o

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

*Crosses fingers* I hope so... =)

Posted by NekuTheEmo 12 years ago Report

;P