Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report

Very nice story in all vore-related respects.

Posted by huitcinquante 12 years ago Report

As always, this sequel was very very nice, and mostly very erotic... Mona is a very lovely character, even if I find her a little too ...romp:) All aussies aren't like her aren't they ? But she have too a lot of girlish maners. She's so dominating that give the impression she's acting like a man.
I wonder... would'nt she be able to swallow somebody who doesn't want to be ?
thank you again anyways

Posted by bedfordsb 12 years ago Report

Hi huitcinquante, Mona is just an exaggerated Aussie woman, but most of them are pretty direct and up front. The idea with her is that because she grew up on a farm in the outback, she's quite tough but also a bit girly too. I deliberately made her a bit different to the other girls in my stories.

All the "secret" guests at the vore restaurant and the IVC want to be swallowed, so Mona wouldn't have been faced with eating someone who was unwilling. But Sahiba did, just once, to the old tramp who tried to assault her ...

Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report

Bloody hell... That was a real treat! Lovely work, and a lot of fun. It gives a very good idea of what it's all like for the participants in the competition - the excitement and casual pleasure of a wild day (and possibly a *really* wild night), and the opportunity to make new friends. They'll certainly be going home with some interesting memories!

I wondered briefly whether Sahiba might indeed become attached to Deben, and his expressive eyes. But having got what she wanted from him, she was quite content to gulp him down like the others. Everyone ended up satisfied. :p

Posted by bedfordsb 12 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!