Great. Well-written, certainly better than most. Very slight grammatical hiccups here and there; a proofreading will get them. Creative concept and very sexy execution.
Love this one. Such a simple, yet effective and solid introduction.The smug pred carrying around her prize in such public display while the other spy is alive and contained within is so exciting.
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Posted by Paraffine 13 years ago Report
Good. Very good. I liked that, very nice descriptive language. There are a few sentences that look off to me, but I am no native english speaker.
Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 13 years ago Report
This was a awesome story and a really good vore concept I am weary exited to reed future chapters of it
Posted by TW 13 years ago Report
Well done. Very well done. Most enjoyable.
Posted by ThingOfPurpleFlurp 13 years ago Report
Great. Well-written, certainly better than most. Very slight grammatical hiccups here and there; a proofreading will get them. Creative concept and very sexy execution.
Posted by Demihunger 13 years ago Report
Intriguing story. Do hope to see more.
Posted by TootCore 2 years ago Report
Love this one. Such a simple, yet effective and solid introduction.The smug pred carrying around her prize in such public display while the other spy is alive and contained within is so exciting.