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The final and longest (though not by that much) part of the series is here! Hopefully I wasn't too careless during the proofreading.
While Sandy works together with an eager policeman to try and find Claire, she attempts to escape on her own as well. They tangle with a force greater than they had ever thought.
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Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this whole story :) Every part of it was just great. Thanks for all the effort you put into writing it, Kharon!
Posted by Kharon 12 years ago Report
No problem. Glad I had some loyal readers too, you being among them. Though I think I won't write another multi-part story for a while - I'll go back to less serious one-offs 'till I get some great inspiration.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I can understand your point. I see that your first chapter had 19 favs while the subsequent ones had less. I have experiences a somewhat similar dropoff (I am writing chapter 7 of mine right now, and thinking of ways to draw in new readers). Personally though I always enjoy the longer stories, whether multi-part or not, just because when characters are developed in vore, the sexy sscenes are just that much more intense. Anyway thanks again for a great read--It was quite sad when Sandy died and the emotion has really stuck with me!
Posted by Kharon 12 years ago Report
Thank you. I was worried that I didn't do that part well enough, so I'm glad you didn't see it that way. I can understand the reduction in the number of favs, of course, it would be stupid to expect otherwise. I think that if the story as a whole made even just a few people happier, then it was worth writing.