Posted by RaharuCV 12 years ago Report

It's a very interesting story.

I really enjoyed all the discussion between the two girls.

Mixing anthro and humans in a really good idea, and it's the first time I see someone trying to describe the interaction between those two 'worlds'. Actually, I was hoping that someone would do it one day, and I have to admit that you did it in a perfect way (but that's my opinion).
The personalities of the characters are nicely developped, and I really felt the difference between Maggie and Lisa's mind.
No seriously, you did a great job ! And the story is just the cutest thing I've read here.


I really hope and can't wait to read more about those two girls !
If I may tell my opinion, I hope that you won't make Lisa Maggie's slave ^^ I think that 'buying' her for only one dollar is just a cute way to start an awesome cute relationship, but not a way to hire a slave.
And I also wish that Lisa would stay cute and won't turn into a fat bunny... But htat's my opinion ;) you don't have to care about it !

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Posted by sarahfox 12 years ago Report

Thank you so much! Your comments are very flattering :). Don't worry--Maggie's intention in "buying" Lisa is primarily about protecting her and making sure no one can take her friend from her. She'll never think of Lisa as a slave :). As for the "fattening," I don't plan on taking that to the exaggerated point of making Lisa overly fat, but you can expect some teasing scenes of Maggie encouraging Lisa to eat a little. Mostly the fattening suggestion is teasing right now though ;).

I'm glad you liked the mixing of the worlds together. I've also always wondered about how the two would interact and how the integrated society would work, so I really wanted to develop a setting that explored that in an enjoyable way. I'm glad you like the result :).

Thank you for commenting and I hope you'll enjoy the future stories with these two!

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Posted by RaharuCV 12 years ago Report

I'm glad to hear so =^^= Well, I'm not into BBW, so that's why I was a bit afraid, since a lot of people loves that here x3

And well, as I said, I can't wait to read more, and I'm sure you'll do a great job too with the sequel ^^

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Posted by Teruyo 12 years ago Report

That was really sweet. Anthros aren't usually my thing, but I enjoyed that. Looking forward to more.

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Posted by Teruyo 12 years ago Report

If I have to be nitpicky, though, I noticed you don't put spaces between your ellipses and the word after; like most other punctuation, there should always be a space after them.

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Posted by sarahfox 12 years ago Report

Ooh, I didn't notice that xD. Anyways, thanks for pointing that out and thanks for reading. Glad you liked it :).

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