I have to say I like chapter one a bit better. There was more hints at seduction and Mindcontrol, the prey seemed to be far more willing then in this chapter. Personally that is what I love, making someone become willing prey. I do hope oyu do more chapters, especially from her point of view, Would be wonderful if she took in other boys to "Experiment" various vore methods.
ESPECIALLY if she uses scent based mind control ot lure them in!
Unfortunately I gave up on this series for the time being, I've improved a fair bit since I wrote this and hurts my eyes to look at. At some point in the future I may do a restart.
Posted by Tanmanm1 12 years ago Report
Very nice! Curse that cliffhanger at the end! I can't wait for chapter 3!
Posted by Ruco 11 years ago Report
I have to say I like chapter one a bit better. There was more hints at seduction and Mindcontrol, the prey seemed to be far more willing then in this chapter. Personally that is what I love, making someone become willing prey. I do hope oyu do more chapters, especially from her point of view, Would be wonderful if she took in other boys to "Experiment" various vore methods.
ESPECIALLY if she uses scent based mind control ot lure them in!
Posted by BlueKnight 11 years ago Report
Unfortunately I gave up on this series for the time being, I've improved a fair bit since I wrote this and hurts my eyes to look at. At some point in the future I may do a restart.