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Duh, Duh, Duh! Sam has once more returned to old friends, but how will this effect Emily's future?
Edit: Uploaded the wrong chapter 5... Sorry for the confusion >.>
Posted by Suibelly 12 years ago Report
Simply amazing!
Posted by Firstfate 12 years ago Report
Tyvm ^.^ I hope you will enjoy the rest of the series as well :)
Posted by Suibelly 12 years ago Report
Yes, it's very good.
Posted by Rhysion 12 years ago Report
Well, this didn't come at too much of a surprise. I just didn't know all the specific details behind what Sam was going to do.
The becoming the CEO thing was the only one that felt like it really needed more detail and clarification to me. Gathering up lab equipment and bodies in that small town was simple enough to believe and get, but how and what did she do to infiltrate a corporation like that?
Posted by Firstfate 12 years ago Report
You are forgetting her slime pet A'nora and that Sam can be very dominating when she takes a human as her slave... if she does just eat them right off the bat anyways. I know it's probably something all writers say, but you can probably imagine all the ways that Sam could infiltrate a corporation on your own, without having to read for hours about it in my stories. I tend to move past boring or uninteresting things quickly in my stories because otherwise I would grow bored with the story and you would never get to see half of the stories I write.