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Been some time since my last Update.
These pics are actually already some months old, I planned to upload them together with newer ones. However I want to stop "This" comic here.
Originally I did plan to make a way longer UB comic, but as you all know I wanted to train a little more before that. Well some things did happen.
First Stress in RL due work, then I also looked a little into Game makers, pondering with the idea of creating a game myself (long way till that). And I also wanted to look into drawing stuff. I thought Vacation would be the best way for that, but winter sure did F*** me this year.
I spent Christmas in hospital due pneumonia and was tired all the time after (am still today). Too shorten things: Even though I feel ok now, I feel too damn tired all the time and lost my interest in this project.
To be honest, I am still surprised so many did like it. I made this comic without any story idea to begin with XD

It was merely to test drawing skill and methods to do comic panels.

I only started drawing 1 idea after the other. But now I am having no real concept of a story and it bugs me very much.
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By now I want to end this with an open ending. Making the Unbirthed one looking into an uncertain future,
but with the confirmation that his new mother will take good care of him.
Thanks for all the support on this one, but I want to spend the little power I currently have on other things for now.
Starting tomorrow I’m going to need to go to work again. I have the feeling my vacation was stolen from me, but I can’t change it I guess. >>
I will of course still do UB pics & comics. So don’t worry

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dragonfred

Posted by dragonfred 12 years ago Report

nice and hope your okay! good comic though i liked it a lot =D

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

Thanks^^

gulpin

Posted by gulpin 12 years ago Report

I loved your comic it was Amazing! And i hope your feel better. :)

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

Lets say i feel more stable now... I have the condition of a 70 year old man right now (am 27)

gulpin

Posted by gulpin 12 years ago Report

Oh my.

Death1963

Posted by Death1963 12 years ago Report

a good comic and wood like it if you can continue it but that can be of in the futcher when you are in the mood for it

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

I plan on making a new comic in time.... but if ya really wanna know, i plan on animations. Yes animations: which probably means UB animations o.o

psvorefan1520

Posted by psvorefan1520 12 years ago Report

Please remember to avoid using white text with white/bright backgrounds. I had trouble with seeing a few words in there, even when I tilted my computer screen back. <_<

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

Sorry, I could see it just fine and wanted to keep the font ><

CGR-7

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

Well if this is the end of the series, Paradox, I just like to say that it was an awesome run. This really was a nice comic. =D

I do hope you feel better real soon. I know the feeling, I had bronchial pneumonia once when I was a kid and trying to breathe with any pneumonia affliction is an absolute nightmare. =(

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

Thank ya, well I'm glad that i amable to breath stable now (even though i still have some problems sometimes). Did you also had a red itching skin after the use of penicillin? 2 days, after i stopped using it, i had a rash all over my body except my face. That was my 2nd RL nightmare in 2 weeks >.>

CGR-7

Posted by CGR-7 12 years ago Report

Exactly which antibiotic I was given back then is too long ago for me to remember but no, that didn't happen to me. I was probable given just a broad-spectrum antibiotic and a cough suppressant; they didn't know at the time that I had bronchial pneumonia and it was found out later after I was over it.

But about your condition, Paradox... mind you that I'm not an M.D., but my Dad has also experienced the same reaction when he was given penicillin in the past. It's an allergic reaction, pure and simple. It's a very common drug allergy and you'd never know you have it 'til you're actually given penicillin. In some people (your case) it can be mild and in others it can be pretty server.

Mech__Warrior

Posted by Mech__Warrior 12 years ago Report

Can't really read the second panel, but you still did an excellent job with this series and I hope you continue it in the future!

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

My brightness levels must be different from most people, I dont have problems reading the text XD

Anyway thanks, and I'll try

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

So what happened to the guy? I mean we know he's still alive but? I'm confused.

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 12 years ago Report

Open ending^^ Think of your own

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

Ah I see, alright then.

Peterdens

Posted by Peterdens 11 years ago Report

Paradox you should make a remake of this from her point of view couse this is djust from his view and i would like to know what She was gona "Tell him" from Page 4 Frame 2!

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 11 years ago Report

I'm currently planning something else :D

In a kind of way it is a remake of this one, but your suggestion of making her point of view added another idea to my list :P

Peterdens

Posted by Peterdens 11 years ago Report

ooohh cant wait for it! =)

CopperRobot

Posted by CopperRobot 11 years ago Report

If I am allowed to say so, you're not the best at drawing human bodies and you do need to work on it. But I'll be damned if you're not the best at coming up with awesome story lines.

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 11 years ago Report

>-> this comic was 6 months ago and the reason i cancelled it was that i couldnt draw human bodies too well....
Saying it like this feel like "you didnt improve at human bodies"

CopperRobot

Posted by CopperRobot 11 years ago Report

I had totally forgot about that. My deepest appologies. Compairing your drawings now do show that you've improved.
Again, I'm sorry.

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 11 years ago Report

Is ok. Was just a little shocked since that your comment I cancelled this comic. You were not the first one that told me that and I also thought that. I Know that I still need lot more in the training but so far everyone told me i got better (compared to this).^^

CopperRobot

Posted by CopperRobot 11 years ago Report

Everyone can improve in something.
And come to think about it I can't even draw, so maybe I shouldn't have said anything in the first place.

Also, I got a bit disapointed when you said it was canceled, I wanted to see more.

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 11 years ago Report

Well, it was sudden. But i saw no point in doing a long time comic when i hate it in the beginning ><

I had 0% concept doing it actually XD
Well the new one has also only a loose one, but at least I have ideas I can put into there.

The more I looked at this Comic, the more i thought: Train & Restart... I think with 2in1 I will do far better than i ever could have with this one... I still need to work more on the new one though :P

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report

Looking back into this comic, which to a case I like regardless. If I ever thought on this concept being continued; odds are I'd likely bet the ingested 'baby' would likely regress, until their possibly pulled even 'deeper' into their/his mother's womb, to ovaries. And possibly beyond, to say; a "DNA/genetic" level. But hey, that's assuming it's a more predatory 'ending', compared to a likely long term regression/rebirth cycle, sort of deal.

Paradox

Posted by Paradox 3 years ago Report

I dont plan on doing Unbirth stuff again for i mostly lost interest in it.
Also, even when i did this comic i disliked the back to ovaries thing. Since i favoured the motherly over the predatory.

So Sorry XD