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Naruto vore story.
Hinata/Naruto
F/M
Wrote two versions of the story, which isn't different at first glance... but this one goes through the ordinary slow process.
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Posted by Aickavon12 12 years ago Report
the description says F/M the tags say F/F!
Posted by Vir 12 years ago Report
Silly typo. Fixed now.
Posted by Aickavon12 12 years ago Report
^_^ yay!
Posted by Flame14 12 years ago Report
Yeah! Hinata and her stomach are back in action.
Just read both the fast and slow and have to say I personally prefer the slow as it gives a chance for a more detailed digestive experience. And to be completely truthful, when I saw how little Naruto had seemed to have grown ninja-wise on his training trip I couldn't help but feel greatly disappointed in him. As such I think he defiantly makes himself more useful at the time as padding on sweet little Hinata.
I am a diehard Naru/Hina fan mind you but, read how Hinata ends up eating and digesting him is just something I can't help but to approve of.
Please keep up your writing and I hope to see more of Hinata eating ninja's.
Posted by Vir 12 years ago Report
Thank you. The fast part was more a focus on making Naruto seem so overwhelmingly insignificant before Hinata. Gobbled up, digested and shat out - barely even a bump in her daily work.
His training was more focused on getting the basics down, which he was bad at pre-journey. Doesn't stop him from being confident though... and Hinata sorted him out very quickly.
Posted by Flame14 12 years ago Report
I think Hinata should have done something like this during that Bikōchū Beetle filler arc. Plenty of people for her to consume from the Iwa (hidden stone) ninja to her own team and Naruto. Either way it would have shown people that they shouldn’t mess with her or it would show people if she didn’t eat all of them or keep it a secret.
Posted by The K 12 years ago Report
Hinata and her stomach digestion of doom is always great to read.
Posted by Bright 12 years ago Report
Considering how much these ninjas jump around the roof tops I am surprised none of them have collided earlier.
Always fond of mistaken eatings, and you certainly delivered with this story.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
As a guy who likes reading and writing slow and detailed stories, I prefer this one
Posted by Luckless 12 years ago Report
This is the first story I've read by you. I normally prefer strict micro but this story did it for me. Loved those descriptions and belly pats. I will definitely be looking at your other stuff!