Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report

Heh; "Your food is disagreeing with you".

Very enjoyable! Although with you saying there would be a twist, and suggesting that Mona wouldn't be at the competition, I was slightly worried at unaccountable moments. (Such as her long drive to Sydney. Surely she wasn't going to have an accident or something? No; good. Sigh of relief!)

Mona remains a fun and very appealing character. Her casual enjoying of what she does; the way she interacts with her "food" and doesn't appear to take it too seriously... Until that twist indeed at the end, which suddenly forces her to adopt quite a different perspective! I didn't expect to see Mona shaken. Well played.

The idea of "tummytappers" is both amusing and logical. And I'd wondered once whether the Vore Restaurant might branch out into other countries! With a multinational, Tiff may have found herself a neat little earner there.

Dannii looks like a nice newcomer to the vore scene (although she might not be around for very long!). Her friendship with Mona, despite her being "girly" and Mona not, feels natural. I smiled at Mona not being at all subtle (telling a wide-eyed Dannii that vore is a turn-on, that she's sometimes done it with girls she was going to eat...).

I hope they get a bit of practice for Dannii before the qualifier. She may have a large stomach, but can she comfortably eat a large, moving meal? Bit of a risk, substituting her in for Mona!

Anyway... This was a real treat, as ever! :)

Posted by bedfordsb 11 years ago Report

Ah well yes, Dannii will be getting in some practice. I thought it would be straining credibility for her to walk straight in to a qualifier! Mona is supposed to be managing her, if she can reconcile herself with the "issue", so there will be a training session hopefully quite soon before the qualifier.

Pleased you liked the story

Posted by srimak 11 years ago Report

Mona casually farts and jokes about the fate of her victims, and she is definitely not giving them proper Christian burials. But I’m still in love with her and wouldn’t hesitate to give up my life if I had the possibility to meet up with her. She might be a bit disrespectful in regards to how she deals with her “victims” remains, but more than compensates that with how well she treats them before she gobbles them up. But no emotional strings attached, she is more than happy to turn them into shit and for her it’s an intense power trip. However suddenly her word is shaken when she encounter a dear friend that wants to go down her digestive system, which makes her think about what she is turning fellow human being into. I sincerely hope that this shock won’t stop Mona from doing what she does best and that she continues until her body count reaches high ten thousands. Eating is becoming a sexual thing for Mona and she is comfortable with having sex with her victims before devouring them. I think this aspect of Mona’s casual attitude to eating people has endless possibilities. I’m looking forward to the next chapters and lots of more stories starring Mona.

Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report

Another girl with a secret crush on or fascination with Mona? :) lovely story.