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The long-awaited third page of the third and final part of this epic vore comic; Based loosely on The Envious Sailor Senshi story written by me. Enjoy.
Artwork by Vale City.
Commissioned by me and brainstorm.
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Posted by Redpod 11 years ago Report
Nic epciture and digesito aja ai love it jaj
Posted by Grim1995 11 years ago Report
it be awsome if there was an alternate ending
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 11 years ago Report
Like what? Rei eating Minako instead? Because while I'd like to see that, I personally feel that if ChaosMaker isn't the one to commission it, or at least give permission because this whole comic was based off three stories he wrote, it just wouldn't... hm, I want to say "feel right", but that might not apply here.
Anyway, sorry about the wall of text reply.
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 11 years ago Report
I appreciate what said.
It does sound rather tempting; Commissioning an alternate(like I'm trying to do with the Ranma 1/2 vore comic I'd commissioned from Kiyoa) could be fun, but my main objective was to create a story-inspired comic so that my fans can visualize something close to what I attempted to describe in the story and, hopefully, encourage people to read said story, but it appears only the former of those two objectives was a success. That said, it'd be kinda pointless to throw another $100+ at this just to entertain the plight of a few fans. I'd be much better off commissioning a completely new vore scenario or trying my hand at vore artwork.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 11 years ago Report
I would recommend commissioning alternates, but only if the following sequence is at most four pages, no more. Because really, if an alternate sequence goes longer than the original, than it seems more thought was put into it than the original. Anyway, that ramble aside.
I'm sure some people will have read the story, because hey, I did. You've got a knack for writing from what I read. Also, I would give more of a recommendation to you trying your hand at artwork, that way you can bring your ideas to visualization without having to rely on cash.
And that's another wall of text reply.
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 11 years ago Report
I don't mind wall texts. I read and edit longer scripts on a near-daily basis. When I'm not writing, I'm helping or potentials with their writing craft.
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 11 years ago Report
*other*
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 11 years ago Report
Ah, I see. I just feel the need to apologize about making such large comments here. Don't know why.