All three of these pieces are fantastic. ^^ I really loved her in the Avatar series and it is a shame there isn't much content with her on Ekas. Thanks for doing this! *poofs to fave all three pieces*
I'm really convinced that one of the hardest things in vore art is the exaggerated belly size. The larger a belly gets, the harder it is to convincingly make it look attached to the body. You've done two things here that accomplish that. The most obvious thing is that you've made a break in the outline, creating a clear and obvious attaching point and shaded it properly. Secondly, her stomach has mass, it's not a perfect sphere but has instead has collapsed under it's own weight due to gravity. It's got "flour sack" physics for lack of a better term. That all said there is one weak spot: her legs. It seems like you've tried to have her gut shape around the contours that her legs create, but for whatever reason it still comes off as flat and disconnected.
Posted by razorbacknod 11 years ago Report
All three of these pieces are fantastic. ^^ I really loved her in the Avatar series and it is a shame there isn't much content with her on Ekas. Thanks for doing this! *poofs to fave all three pieces*
Posted by Red_Wolfen 11 years ago Report
Thanks! And I agree; there is not enough Avatar vore art at all. I may have to make some more...
Posted by razorbacknod 11 years ago Report
Please do, in fact, I'd be willing to trade my writing services in exchange to see you do another piece featuring Toph in particular. ^^
Posted by Gold_King 11 years ago Report
I'm really convinced that one of the hardest things in vore art is the exaggerated belly size. The larger a belly gets, the harder it is to convincingly make it look attached to the body. You've done two things here that accomplish that. The most obvious thing is that you've made a break in the outline, creating a clear and obvious attaching point and shaded it properly. Secondly, her stomach has mass, it's not a perfect sphere but has instead has collapsed under it's own weight due to gravity. It's got "flour sack" physics for lack of a better term. That all said there is one weak spot: her legs. It seems like you've tried to have her gut shape around the contours that her legs create, but for whatever reason it still comes off as flat and disconnected.
Class dismissed.
Posted by Putinforgod 11 years ago Report
That belly and pose are so beautiful!
But now it looks like she won't be able to stand up with the belly gettin in the way of the legs.
I still like that detail.
Posted by Psyman 11 years ago Report
I'd like to see her in a week or so after she has digested that lovely meal! She was soooo skinny before. Love the belly!