Quite good so far. I just couldn't help but feeling that something was missing between panels 2 and 3. I mean, on panel 2 Pinkie licks Octavia and then, all of a sudden, Pinkkie already has half of Octavia's body on her mouth! I just can't shake the feeling that it was a too sudden of a change.
Oh! I see. Well then, it's quite well done for a first time. Anyway, I', quite enjoying the series. Any idea as to when will the next part be released?
Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
Quite good so far. I just couldn't help but feeling that something was missing between panels 2 and 3. I mean, on panel 2 Pinkie licks Octavia and then, all of a sudden, Pinkkie already has half of Octavia's body on her mouth! I just can't shake the feeling that it was a too sudden of a change.
Posted by justanothermeal 11 years ago Report
to be fair, she doesn't usually draw vore, and clearly indicated to me that she didn't know what she was doing, and I told her to try her best anyway
Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
Oh! I see. Well then, it's quite well done for a first time. Anyway, I', quite enjoying the series. Any idea as to when will the next part be released?
Posted by justanothermeal 11 years ago Report
i'm not sure, but I don't think it will be long
Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
Awesome!