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Page 2 out of 3 - Vore In Progress
One more page and we can leave Christmas behind us for a year.
QUESTION: What do you gals and guys think about the 5th panel? I was trying to make it look like an internal view from her belly and throat. Don't know why, but something just seems wrong about it, I'm not exactly happy about it. Would love to hear your opinions.
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Posted by Leika 11 years ago Report
I don't really see anything wrong with it.
Posted by Rac0r 11 years ago Report
Hmm.. I guess it's just me seeing things.. Let's hope it's that :D
Posted by RavenXeo 11 years ago Report
the only thing i can see thats wrong with it is that with as much pudge as she had..there would be alot more...mess in that belly of hers..maybe just me though~
Posted by Rac0r 11 years ago Report
True dat... I should have added more "mess" in there, it's those kind of things I notice after it's already done :D
Posted by Demicus 11 years ago Report
Oooo, will she make it out, or digest like her fellows... Both are good... Loving this.
Posted by Rac0r 11 years ago Report
Let's just say, she'll never bring her food back up.. She just has to work through the pain :D
Thank you!
Posted by CGR-7 11 years ago Report
You mean your 5th panel, Rac0r? =\
Personally, I think it looks fine. But I think what you might feel is "wrong" with it, is that length of tissue that divides her throat and stomach into two separate chambers (similar to the cardia); I've seen a lot of other artists draw the throat and stomach as one chamber, but in reality, it's not. You kind of went against the status quo, which is good thing, but it looks different to ya; it looks different to me, too. Does that make sense?
Posted by Rac0r 11 years ago Report
Umm.. YES, 5th, that's what it says. And I surely did not just fixed that second ago!! .. I can't count.. :DD
Hmm, that actually could be it. I've seen others draw it as one too, I just couldn't find a reference for it. Hoping it's good enough for everyone though :))
Posted by soline 11 years ago Report
it looks wonderful!
Only thing 'wrong' I'd say is a lack of mess in thatbelly (plus personal preference >;3) but it looks good! I get what you're saying about the throat though, I tried something similar and had similar issues, I think it's just one of those things, you can't much draw valves in an x-ray picture without it looking weird, like how you can't draw feet in some positions without it looking weird, even if perfectly anatomically correct.
Posted by Rac0r 11 years ago Report
Thanks! ^-^ and yep, I think I should have added some more stuff in there. Didn't know how without making it look too gruesome, but I could have added maybe the collar and some hairballs. Those kind of things I notice after it's done :D
What I was thinking was that maybe it would have looked better if that middle part between the throat and belly wasn't an x-ray. I think that way it wouldn't look "weird", but I guess that panel isn't turning people off, so I'm happy. :D
Posted by soline 11 years ago Report
Perhaps like http://aryion.com/g4/view/195473 ? that's generally my personal tastes, no gore, just lots of mush, with solid bits, like you said, collar, hairballs, etc XD.
Mnh, perhaps, but I like the way it shows her still juuuust below the mouth. ah well, live and learn ^_^ and weird or not, it's still veeeery sexy.
Posted by Thanatos2k 11 years ago Report
The problem with panel 5 is there's a whole bunch of unaccounted-for volume of her feet. It should be bulging out the "back" significantly more than what it appears here.