Uploaded: 11 years ago
Views: 7,366
File size: 12.79 KiB
MIME Type: application/rtf
Comments: 8
Favorites: 58
I'm not entirely pleased with how this one turned out. I feel like I rushed it in the end, even though I've been working on it for over a month.
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by simalst 11 years ago Report
You are a very good writer. I would be happy, if you would write more stories like that.
Posted by Derpus 11 years ago Report
Thanks! I'd be happy to oblige.
Posted by ZiLEC 11 years ago Report
Man I can't tell ya how much I love this story, keep up the great work!
Posted by Derpus 11 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by lilShota 10 years ago Report
This is one of the best historys i haven readed i must say Jack character like me a lot and underage preds + gas play + digestion + scat
is what i most enjoy just tellign at all great work
Posted by Derpus 10 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Xenophage17 9 years ago Report
I actually really enjoyed this. Stevie is perfect as such young immature predator, I particularly enjoyed him turning Jack into spaghetti and the embarrassing full tour with farts was the icing on the cake.
In fact I wish there was more Stevie full tour, I checked out your squishy boy interactive and there are 3 scenes (2 at Andrews party and 1 after Andrew freezes Jack into pudding) but none of them have been added to.
Sorry for the long comment, really love your stuff.
Posted by Derpus 9 years ago Report
Huh. Now that you mention it, there isn't really much vore with Stevie.
I ought to remedy that.
And thanks