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This is another collab-o-mission fantasy story that I had huge, massive, hippo-sized fun writing : ) It starts out with some accidental AV / reverse Full Tour and, just spirals crazier and crazier from there.
It's got nearly every possible kind of expansion / inflation / belly-stuffing, oral/anal/ub vore, and a crazy 5-person sex scene. Also the usual drama : )
The devilishly creative Endless-Appetite provided a 2-page outline for me and then I wrote out the full thing.
blondevelvet also did some totally awesome art for this story here:
http://aryion.com/g4/view/256597
Thanks for the commission BV!
EA's Page:
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/endless-appetite
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Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report
Jeez, this is some crazy stuff you're writing. I think they deserve a tame slice-of-life story to slow things down. ^^;
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
I think they do too : ) This story was a commission but you're free to use our imagination to come up with any other scenes you'd like to see with the characters. : )
Posted by Mid_Night 11 years ago Report
wow, that so much, so mixing magic and villains will be this crazy, cool.
nicely done with the story but I wonder what you have more for stories in your sleeves?
because I am edger to read more.
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
<3
Posted by Mid_Night 11 years ago Report
^___^
Posted by THExDARKxSANDMAN 11 years ago Report
<3 great story
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
<3 I had so much fun making this and it's really great to hear that just a few others liked it too.
Posted by GarrettAelito 11 years ago Report
Another wonderfully-detailed and fleshed-out story; well done, Indighost! And while I obviously haven't seen the outline written by Endless-Appetite, based on the final product I'd say you both deserve massive high-fives/props/kudos/creds/thumbs-up/gold stars/Simoleons/etc.
Not to mention that you are some kind of lean, mean writing machine; I mean, practically 142 kb of raw text in less than a month? I'm not sure which I'd need to replace first, my keyboard or my fingers! As a fan of longer stories I obviously love it, but I'm also jealous - I would literally have a mental breakdown trying to write half that much even half as well!
Seriously, if you have some kind of super-writing secret (Voice-to-text technology from hundreds of years in the future? Super-advanced that can type over 300 wpm with 100% accuracy? Advanced CIA writing training?), please share it with me! You can trust me to keep a secret!
Side note: Firefox's auto-correct thinks I should replace your username ('Indighost') with 'Indigestion', which I found amusing enough to mention. Kind of fitting in a way I guess, depending on how you look at it. ;P
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
: ) Thank you! My only secret is an unnatural urge to write very silly stories, and there is a place can I go which has no distractions. Awesome on the auto-correct too, lol.
Posted by FrostByte 11 years ago Report
Very sexy story, Indighost! It was stuffed to the point of RUPTURE with kinky fun. The descriptions of Donna's dangerously stretched condition and general discomfort with the things sloshing about within her...are blissful! Keep up the amazing work, bud. ♥
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
It's the type of story that I really missed from those golden old days of stuffing & vore. Luckily EA was there to help push things over the top :)
Posted by ipeerownu 11 years ago Report
I happened to come across this by pure chance, and my jaw hit the desk after a couple of hours of reading when I realized I didn't finish reading this yet.
This story was very interesting to read. The thrill ride of two friends being thrown into an unlikely adventure just for it to all have an unexpected outcome? That's awesome!
I can't believe how thrilling this story was to read. And according to the comments that were posed before me, it was written in less than a month? That's an achievement in itself!
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
Thank you very much. sounds like it was equal fun to read and write :)
Posted by Zavvnao 9 years ago Report
I like the part of snake vore, but feel bad for the snakes for some reason X3
Posted by Indighost 9 years ago Report
somebody has to get eaten. Feels are natural :-)
Posted by Zavvnao 9 years ago Report
I see X3
Posted by purplelord 8 years ago Report
i would like to rp like the beginnning
Posted by purplelord 8 years ago Report
A full comic about this story is perfect for those with no immagination
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
Sometimes I think i should practice drawing, but i have too many ideas and just go back to writing and doing RP at F-list.net lol
Posted by purplelord 8 years ago Report
okay
Posted by blakdyfrst 7 years ago Report
How do you do it? Ever thought of making vore novels? Like, seriously!
Posted by Indighost 7 years ago Report
:)
You're so sweet ♥ I did think of that. Most of my, 'general story ideas' have been written out in this folder. I have a few more ideas. I do have one novel-length idea about a certain secret character that I'm keeping under wraps.
The hardest part is deciding whether to spend time on writing, drawing, coding vore game, roleplaying, or doing all that normal stuff normal people do!
Posted by blakdyfrst 7 years ago Report
Making a vore game sounds awesome!