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After the extremely uncomfortable experience the hippo suffered trying to get back home, she and her friend finally arrive back in New York. But they've got three very nefarious smugglers on their tails, all of them trying to get their hands on the loot filling out Donna's intestines! How can they possibly make it home safely?
This was a commission for Endless Appetite. Thanks again to EA ( http://www.furaffinity.net/user/endless-appetite/ ) for sharing the idea for this extremely fun, over-the-top, perverse fantasy : ) If I have enough free time in the next few months, these characters may yet have more painful situations to endure !
This is a pure fantasy story.
(Part 1 of the story can be found here: http://aryion.com/g4/view/252397 )
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Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 10 years ago Report
Yay, a happy ending. I would've loved for Stephanie and Donna to share a vorish moment in less strenuous situations, but that's a moment for another day. ^^; For now, I'm glad things worked out for both of them.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
Me too! But their fate is controlled by EA, not me :3
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 10 years ago Report
Well, where is this Endless Appetite?
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/endless-appetite/
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 10 years ago Report
Are Donna and Stephanie really his characters? I don't see any mention of them in his gallery.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
EA specified the species. I created the characters' personalities and backstories, as commissioned.
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 10 years ago Report
So, does that make them his or yours? This is confusing. XP
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
EA has final say on what happens with the characters in this story (and the next one I am writing), but I am free to make suggestions and volunteer new ideas that may be approved or disapproved. That's how it works.
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 10 years ago Report
Well, what's this new story you're working on?
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
Not much to say really. It's abot 45 pages and it's about 2/3 done. More shenanigans with these characters, including character devleopment. it's fun :)
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 10 years ago Report
Well, I'd still love to see more of Donna and Steph, especially from BlondeVelvet.
Posted by ElPortero 10 years ago Report
Well, that escalated quickly. :P
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
I know, right? :3 This was probably the most over-the-top one I've done yet. But it was a lot of fun for that very reason.
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
Love it Indighost.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
Thank you <3