I was hoping nature would kick in, but the story was sweet. It had enough tension to be enjoyable. You kept switching between David and Daniel for the mouse's name. First sentence tail not tale.
While outside my general preferences, this was a very good story with relatable characters. I would definitely read more from you.
Posted by Genowing 11 years ago Report
Such a sweet story.
Posted by maleperduis 11 years ago Report
Another great read
Posted by oishi1 11 years ago Report
I was hoping nature would kick in, but the story was sweet. It had enough tension to be enjoyable. You kept switching between David and Daniel for the mouse's name. First sentence tail not tale.
While outside my general preferences, this was a very good story with relatable characters. I would definitely read more from you.
Posted by Littledude 11 years ago Report
Thanks for pointing that out. David was going to be his name originally but I decided to change it.
Posted by MicroNekoGirlPur 10 years ago Report
aww~ this was really cute. I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked on this, but this was definitely worth reading~