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World of Warcraft vore story.
Story continues, and http://profile.aryion.com/profile/Sani_ has boarded the ship that waited for her, bound for Pandaria. But of course it does turn rather problematic for herself and the ship's crew both... but especially the crew.
F/16xM
(Rather unhappy about this one. This story has been postponed and restarted, written and rewritten several times over these last few months due to several frustrating factors. Eventually in annoyance decided to post it as is as I bloody well need a transition chapter. I could not simply skip the journey across the ocean that simply. Future chapters ought to be better, much more freedom ahead)
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Posted by MrQuarantine 10 years ago Report
Wow great story as always I have to say iv'e been following this story for quite a while and the series ranks super high on my list of vore stories that ive read over the years the mystique of sani and the brilliant description of detail and well described vore scenes really make it stand out in my opinion im so glad to see u continuing to work on it and I hope to read more in the future if I could be critical for a moment though I would like to say however the only issue I have with the series is that it could be a little more complex as in maybe a few more story elements could be added I realize it is a vore story but sometimes the anticipation of vore can be just as satisfying like instead of having her eating everyone every chapter with little to no problem perhaps she comes across people/friends(future snacks)/rivals that can actually defend themselves/rival her so to speak and the vore happens down the road when other characters least expect or during another chapter altogether or other integral part of the story or something to me character development is imo a big deal especially if its a series and while I love sani adding a few situations where shes the under dog or meets someone whos a challenge and has to use other means for victory or maybe getting some back story on her would really be nice im just saying that maybe adding a few more main characters that last more than one chapter would help because it adds more ties and complexity to it and elevates the story to even greater heights im no writer by any means but I just wanted to give my opinion on the series but regardless whether you take critiques to heart or not you can guarantee I will eagerly be awaiting the next installment ^^
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
That was quite the lot of interesting vore scenes.