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And now the "Hunt" commences! With no one being off limits... unless they are already in a Baby's belly xP
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Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
love it.
Say what is Isabelle about to do that she looked at her stomach sadly?
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Now "that" would be telling xP and you know how I do so enjoy teasing my readers xD
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
oh you, you never stop that do you? :P
Well when you upload the next chapters we will know.
say i guess you will kill me, I end up adding two more children to Core's legion after the ones i made.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
No, no I won't! That's why I like being the one with the story in my head :) I know "all" the answers... save for this one... 'when is the story going to end?' xD
I'm hoping to add more chapters soon because are only a few more to part one of the story... but I "think" I finally managed to jump start my inspiration again after killing it so I could properly do my research xD
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
i see just don't be late with upload.
the suspense is killing me already.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Sorry >.< Today was the day I have a job to take care of so that eats up most of my day. Right now I'm just finishing up a chapter and then I will post the rest of part one of The Mother Virus...
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
awa don't be *hugs* it just your stories are addict to read.
i suffer feeling this suspense when i was reading a Lady's delight by Mukat and i again i do feeling when you are about to post something new or more chapters for other stories.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
If I could remember "everything" to do with my stories and had a library like memory to draw upon... I'd have no trouble starting and stopping stories only to pick up the old ones right where I left off, but unfortunately, my head don't work that way >.>
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
i know, hey you know.
you just spark an idea to for chapter of a story or maybe a new story.
mmmmma library like memory to draw upon any information.
mmmmm that's good one.
Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report
Out in the city, Perkins was trudging through an ally when a thug jumped out and tried to hit (him) with a bat. To the shock of the thug and all the other thieves with her, the bat simply broke against Perkins rock solid body as the woman continued to walk along. Even when the thugs threatened her with knives, Perkins ignored them and continued to guide her troop along in an attempt to find a candy store that had not already been looted or taken over by a gang.
I saw that.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
xD She's a brick... not to bright but durable as hell :P
Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report
I believe I was talking about the "him" part.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Ah CRAP! Sometimes my mind is thinking one thing and my hands are typing another >.< I didn;t even catch it until you pointed out the "him" part lol
Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report
It must happen occasionally, because I've seen it a few more times. Heck, I believe TMV2 ch.3 has the word "brother" in it.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
that does not surprise me... I really try my best not get words like Him/her or Brother/sister mixed up, but sometimes I'm just that tired and my brain gets confused when I think about the female characters in my stories, since some really are created more "manly" than others xD
Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report
Ehh, happens to anyone that types for an extended period of time.
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Poor commander Brown... I will say, this series is miles better in quality than your older stuff! I like the detail you put in this world! and this time, the massive amount of different characters doesn't seem forced: without the Mother, this kind of global setting makes the many faces so much more believable.
Hmmmmm... I actually feel kinda sorry for Brown and Shelly and her schoolmates. You do a good job of making the Sancuary organization a set of good people making hard decicions to protect people. It's kinda sad that Brown's mind got ripped to pieces just for trying to do her job and protect people. I think it'd be kinda funny to have Brown's personality suddenly start chewing out the glutton when she starts messing up her farm. I also imagine that Shelly would at least want her lover to be nice to the people who really weren't trying to hurt her.
ah well, that's just me. I'm enjoying this story a lot.
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Just wait till later, you'll see that ole "farmer Brown" is alive and well, just in a different skin lol
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Well, you mean the villain taking up her name? How does that make what happened to the trooper less horrific?
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Because, while the Glutton did "devour" Agent Brown, she "absorbed" EVERYTHING, which means that, in essence, Brown and the Glutton have literally become one and the same. I leave it up to you to decided whether Farmer Brown was eaten by the Glutton, or if the Glutton was absorbed "into" Farmer Brown :P
Posted by Darian 10 years ago Report
Ah... poor everybody, jeez. Little Isabelle looks like she keeps having to eat people she likes...
I wonder if Sharpey, Pus, and Isabelle ever feel really bad about deceiving these survivors. For all humans seem to be universally corrupted, the majority in this world aren't pure evil. Some are just trying to survive. Honestly, even if I was a non-human eating sex-machine, if I was watching a bunch of families trying to survive the apocolypse, I'd feel a little guilty about making them feel safe only to crush their last hopes when it was conveinent to me.
It's good that it seems like Macgraf seems to be turning into a legitimate villian: no good-guy needs to use their power to spy on every single one of their troops constantly.
I recognize Ink from some of the other stories as one of the Mother's Main queens... I forget where though... is she the one in charge of the orphanage of the lost? I'd like to see more about perhaps the one character who tries to take care of the children, even if she is swallowing them up.
and on that note... what the hell is up with the Core?! I mean, sure, the girls were bratty, but they were KIDS! they don't know any better! That Sister Hiatus seems like a straight up religious nutcase! is she supposed to be one of The Mother's approved, if she's doing shit like that to kids?
Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report
Isabelle is like that, but just wait, she become even more of a "little princess" later on xD
As for Sharpey and Pus, they could care less about the others, to them, humans are just food. They are not the "cuddly" kind of Daughters. Plus, only Sharpey really ate any of the survivors, Pus has her own way of feeding without needing to consume her meals completely :) just... don't get in her way.
McGraf... let's just say she'll be a constant "monster" in this story :P
Ink would be the Queen of the Suits, or in otherwords, black slime creatures that use their gelatinous forms to encapsulate humans inside themselves to pleasure the meals "entire" being before slowly absorbing them.
The "Core" is what Sister Hiatus based a cult around and you'll see just how twisted the "good" sister really is later on lol.