Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report

well i thought one of the Mother's rule for her daughters is never lay a hand on others mates.

as in story you show more of others however about Cat who been going from different masters and mistresses was really well naughty and nasty that till Grey mask appears.

i guess they really get it good with Grey mask rips them.

mmm word of warning, never terrify Rose, i wonder what will happen.

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

You have to understand that The Mother is "out of commission" so to speak, and in this world there will be a lotta "loopholes" being thrown out there xD

Also, you forget that all the Babies are being created 'Literally" from The Mother's body floating around in the atmosphere so it's not like they are "technically" breaking the rules by collecting her "mates" energy for her while she sleeps xP

I really kinda wanted to show the differences between all four of The Mother's wives. Cat is a sex fiend that just wants a master who will love her, while Rose just wants to start a "family" with the love of her life. Then there is Drayne... who simply wants a woman strong enough to protect her in place of her sword, and since The Mother is the only one to "ever" absorb Drayne's sword, only The Mother can tame that "dragon" (quickly ducks as Drayne swings at me)

Also, you seem to forget that the Grey Mask is based on The Mother's hunting form, which is when The Mother gives up on being stealthy and devotes her all to catching her prey while pretty much being unstoppable during the "hunt".

Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report

i see, you i found it a bit creepy of what happen to Cat.

as for Firestar, her story is more of safe one while the other three suffers.

i have a feeling we may see more the Mother's other personas she took form of roaming around in the Mother Virus.

man you really are getting on with this story which i say interesting, you shown lots of other daughters; i have a feeling the bunnies and the teddy bears will come next.

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

Eventually~ :P and believe me, you haven't seen nothing yet xD

Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report

you are getting more all exciting to read the next chapters of Part 2 of the mother virus.

Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report

there a pm i want to send you, please read it.

Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report

Finds out the Succubus' name. "Erotica? ....Erotica?..Erot.." **flips kindle fire in hands** "Okay, Erotica." -_-

Now on a more serious note, I'm beginning to see more story in the second part of this than in the first, and I love it. And it makes sense what happened to Cat.

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

Lol, don't ask the name just came to me since I named a succubus character in a disgea game that xD.

The first part was kinda just the "intro" to get people somewhat associated with this story and the new terminology I am using for the duration of this story. As the story progresses, Maddie won't vanish, but the story won't be focused just on her :)

Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report

And that is why I love it. Btw, you play Disgaea?

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

Only the Gameboy DS version, I've gotten away from console based games because of online memberships and all the extra nonsense they add on to games that triple a games original 80$ cost ><.

Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report

You basically just named XBone in a sentence.

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

yep :/

Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report

Okay then, but the other Disgaeas are still fun to play.

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

I might have to look into them if they got one for the computer, but I also have several other games I play so it may be a while before I get into disgaea

Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report

Sadly, they're all for ps3, but that's about it.

Posted by Firstfate 10 years ago Report

Yeah... I went the Xbox route for console based games, but I'm kinda just done with consoles now thanks to the fiasco the Xbox One's created with the whole "no backwards compatibility" bullshit. I think I'm gonna just stay with comp games for now ><

Posted by reliuskaiser 10 years ago Report

If you ever do go back to console, Sony's got your back.