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Tags: Angel prey Big Belly breast growth busty pred Digestion Disposal F/F F/M Female Pred Female Prey flat chested predator forced vore Horizon in the middle of nowhere Human Pred Human Prey Implied Vore Kimi Aoi Male Prey Masazumi Mitotsudaira Multiple Preds Multiple Preys Oral Vore Scat sex in belly slow digestion Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey Willing
Horizon in the middle of nowhere vore fanfic.
Basically the same as the other one, except as said in the title; with a different ending.
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Posted by Flame14 10 years ago Report
I have only watched one episode of this before feeling like I had missed something important to the series. Guess I'll have to go back and try watching it again.
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Well, do ask if you're confused. Just to note ahead of time since so many seem to somehow miss it, the first few episodes all occur on the same day - just from different povs - for the sake of world building.
Posted by Flame14 10 years ago Report
I see. I thought I had miss a arc or needed to see the prequel to it to fully understand ( there is a prequel isn't there?).
As for the story itself, I liked it. The names and constant back and forth to see the character images was a little annoying but, that is to be expected from someone who doesn't remember the face the name goes to. Understandably you didn't seem to go into as much descriptive detail as say, 'Spiteful Consumption' or such when it came to the swallowing and digestion scenes. Then again, with how long it already is plus all the meals in such a short timeframe, it does make sense why. Hope to read more stories of female predators stuffing themselves with numerous levels of prey from you again soon.
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
If you mean the initial sequence, don't pay it too much mind. There isn't a prequel, the event is explained in the second episode. Due to there being too many people for what little remained of Earth available to human habitation, they erected a separate dimension, a copy of Japan, to inhabit. Then the separate dimension called the Harmonic Divine states collapsed onto the real one and war broke out. The story takes place centuries later.
And thank you. I understand going back and forth can be a tad bit annoying, but such is the case for fanfics of more obscure series.
Posted by Flame14 10 years ago Report
Thanks for explaining. Will make seeing it much easier to understand. Again, hope to see more stories from you in the near future.
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Glad to help. Feel free to ask again if there's something else.
Posted by miner249er 10 years ago Report
pretty good story, what Universe/world are you going to write about next?
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Thanks. And I don't plan on other big forays into different worlds at the moment.
Posted by Flame14 10 years ago Report
Does this mean that you have no other stories in the works right now? Or does it mean that you plan to stick with writing about the Universes you've already worked in?
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
The latter.
Posted by Flame14 10 years ago Report
Glad to hear that.
Posted by Argh 10 years ago Report
Love the new ending! Wish the act of digesting prey had different effects on Kimi, maybe fattened her up so she could have worn her new blubber as a badge of shameless, evil pride. Wonderful nonetheless.
Posted by algog8 10 years ago Report
Yes! Kimi! I hope she eats the whole place
In one sitting.
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I honestly don’t think it’s fair that masazumi doesn’t get swallowed at all, especially considering she might be the tastiest of them all, and maybe even the most ticklish?
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I understand that this is an exception, but she didn't even get a paragraph.