Yeah... I had to move all my working stuff to the office where I work for summer, then I couldn't do much. However in the last few days, I had some slack at work so I could finish the little bit that was left to do on this page at last. I can't do streams anymore, because, yeah, can't have an ongoing stream with my boss and co-workers around, y'know, but I can still work on the pic, I'll keep you updated on it in the following days. I'll send you what it looks like after I do a little more work on it so you can send me some feedback on it. Until then... Enjoy this big page of story development !.. ^^''
Ouais... fait un bon moment qu'il me reste qu'une case ou deux à faire, mais j'ai pas de temps à moi pour dessiner x) Alors là comme je respire un peu et pour me remettre en forme, j'ai terminé la page. Et j'me relance dans ton perso prochainement. ^^
Drinking soapy water is bad, but also fun. You can blow bubbles, real (big) soap bubbles and not gross (tiny) spit bubbles. Granted, most soapy water also tastes horrible...
Er, no, I'm not speaking from personal experience or anything. >.>
Hehe, yeah. But since nothing tastes bad to her, it's fine I guess. Even if it's dirty soapy water, lol. (but yeah, I speak from personnal experience and soapy water tastes terrible ! :D) (y'know, in the shower...)
You mean "nonsense" ? Well it is supposed to be the opposite D: It's supposed to clearly explain what happened previously in the whole comic... But otherwise I can't blame you to dislike story development over fun stuff development. :)
We didn't need an explanation. At no point did I think that her hunger was abnormal... For her. She's never been full, so this explanation that emeralds make you hungrier and hornier, which they don't, is out of the blue and unnecessary.
It's like explaining that an angry guy who gets into fights all the time got into a fight one time because he drank some milk and milk some how made him angry and want to fight.
I'd just assume that it was buisness as usual without the expostion that has no basis in reality, and is therefore actualy more confusing.
Well from my side of the table, it is. I understand that you assume that this was normal for her, but that's exactly the point of this mechanism, she's able, but not that able. Basically it's just to ground the fact that this character doesn't grow out of lust and actually can be full at some point. This was "abnormal" for her. Hell, I must be bad at character creation, but that's how I wanted to make her. :/
That's kind of her way of becoming "unstoppable". You see, I personnally don't want to picture a story where the pred eats and eats and eats and eventually eats the planet and that kinda stuff. I've seen it enough to know that I prefer when things can get out of hands, but that it can be stopped/calmed at some point and that more voracious scenarios can happen in the same storyline (because I have many more ideas with this character and others, and I don't want to make unrelated, different/parallel universe comics where everything starts back as if nothing happened before. Personnal preference here, I guess.)
And I dunno, at some point the thing is so huge that interaction between the lady and the eaten stuff becomes irrelevant to me (and by the way it is with this comic that I understood I prefered otherwise. The part with the trucks at the beginning felt overkill to me after re-reading). So that's why I prefer her to have "limits" but that if some naughty ingredient gets into the mix, something bad can happen. I like gentle preds, giantess, ladies in general, so I always try to make them able to return to their original selves. Again, personnal choice. You may still be against these, but I do think the main idea of her having limits was kinda misunderstood here, hence these few paragraphs. Hope you can enjoy the rest of the story (to come) as well. :) (spoiler : more vore)
Well then why did you use Emeralds as your explanation? Emeralds don't have that effect in real life, or in any story I've ever heard, so explaining them like that is just confusing. You could have said that there was a secret government chemical in one of the trucks, that did that to her.
Also him just explaining why she went out of controle, is jaring and confusing when we had no idea she went out of control. How does he even know what is in and out of her control. If she had expressed concern about having lost control before hand, it would have made sense, but as it stands it was not something we were ready for, especially she goes straight back into eating as soon as she can, just makining it seem this is the way she is.
The fact that he says Genetic tests told him what she ate makes no sesne. You cant tell what someone ate by looking at their genes, blood work would have made much more sense.
Whats more I don't think anyone was under the impression that she was never going to stop.
Its just realy clunky the way it is. I thought it was a joke when I first read it.
Well then you have to understand what I meant better : They analysed her mutant body, and found out that her (fictionnal, invented) mutations makes her interact with emeralds specially. Now, I chose emeralds because it's something that can be found in everyday life without much trouble and can be a story event element easier than a given special chemical. About her now worriying about her loss of control. She wasn't herself. And I intend to do more storylines with this character and these specifications. Also I try to move away from the classic "I'm really hungry therefore I get monstrous powers out of nowhere". I mean, it's fine in most cases, I have nothing against good vore action, but I really like it more when things have reasons. In most comics where a girl gets such abilities out of nowhere, what prevents other girls/persons of achieving the same with the same ease ? Of course it's assumed it's in "vore universes" where such things can happen for the heck of it. It's fine. But here I try to implement characters with incredible vore powers into a realistic, normal people world. Of course such a concept is gonna sound silly one way or another, but I think aside from said silliness, it does make sense. :/
But I guess I'll be done from explaining myself now, if you feel it's better for you to ignore the present and precedent pages' info dump, then do so. Can't force you to adopt my way of thinking if it makes you feel 'meh' with my content :p I'll just let you enjoy it the way you want to. =)
Yeah. Im not one of those people who can do that. If the origional creator writes the story one way I can't dissagree and see it my own way.
Emeralds are made of Aluminum, Silicate, and Beryllium. We consume Aluminum and Silicate in small quantities all the time, Beryllium on the otherhand is something you get from dying stars, so thats a little(lot) less common. But their chemical makeup is basically identicle to rocks and dirt otherwise.
I just think that there are other Items and materials that would better explain her reciving power from them.
Oh, well yeah, if you put it that way, I understand. That does make sense to me now. Obviously, when you know well about a subject and see it being misinterpreted, it kinda fails to entertain. I thought it was fine to put some random mechanics that I thought its foundation didn't matter much, since it's a porn comic and it's supposed to be a fun, light ride. But I have to understand that when writing science fiction (if this can be considered as such), you have to know what you are talking about because any flaws in it will disappoint people that know it better than you.
It's like for instance when I read people on Facebook laughing about a given subject, and I don't find it funny because I know more about it than they do, and well, when you know how this given thing works, this given joke about it is not really funny anymore. Same thing here, but with enjoying stuff instead of finding it funny. That said, excuse my step into the unknown, I would definitely change the Emerald with something that makes more sense, if it was not that the rest of the story is already ready to ink and that it kind of relies on it... Anyways, thanks for your thoughtful input. :)
Yeah it's no problem. It's almost my fault at this point. I know too much random crap. It's basically to the point of having to be "It's Magic, I don't have to Explain It", or "It's Science! Wonderful Magical Science!" for me not to immeadiately be broken out of the story.
It's hilarious, I'm more willing to accept no explanation at all, then an actual explanation most of the time.
Posted by MKX73T 10 years ago Report
O NO keep that bucket away from her !!AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA look out doctor get the stun gun !!!!
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
KEEP CALM, EVERYTHING IS FINE. NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT, SHE'S IN A CONTROLLED ENVIRONMENT.
...Or is she ? O.o
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
I like that guys fuzzy moustache.
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Mustached guys makes design much easier somehow... '>.>
I like him too. :3
Posted by theannoyinggoit 10 years ago Report
Huzzah! More MGfHALM!
Kinda hoping the Doctor makes it out of this alive, really dig how he looks and he seems pretty fun.
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Hurrey ! I'll have to spoil you here, he survives. c:
Posted by Ghostlurker7041 10 years ago Report
THE PLOT THICKENS
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Isn't it more clear, rather ? x)
Posted by Ghostlurker7041 10 years ago Report
THE PLOT THINS
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
xD right !
Posted by Max_C 10 years ago Report
Uh oh. Here we grow again!
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
:B
Posted by RisingMoon336 10 years ago Report
Did she just drink dirty mop water?
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Did you just foresee next page ? :f
Posted by Gold_King 10 years ago Report
(To the tune of Ode to Joy) Exposition, exposition! Rush it out ASAP!
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Haha, totally. Since this is a porn comic, though, I considered better to infodump in select pages rather than slowing the fun happenings' pace.
Posted by AtmosRobot 10 years ago Report
Emeralds?
You mean, like...
CHAOS EMERALDS?
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Phah ! Sounds right. :p
Posted by LittleSlimy 10 years ago Report
Man ! Where have you been ? I have wait for you whole weeks !
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Yeah... I had to move all my working stuff to the office where I work for summer, then I couldn't do much. However in the last few days, I had some slack at work so I could finish the little bit that was left to do on this page at last. I can't do streams anymore, because, yeah, can't have an ongoing stream with my boss and co-workers around, y'know, but I can still work on the pic, I'll keep you updated on it in the following days. I'll send you what it looks like after I do a little more work on it so you can send me some feedback on it. Until then... Enjoy this big page of story development !.. ^^''
Posted by LittleSlimy 10 years ago Report
I enjoy getting news from you more than this page. But i still enjoy this one ... finished ;)
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Ouais... fait un bon moment qu'il me reste qu'une case ou deux à faire, mais j'ai pas de temps à moi pour dessiner x) Alors là comme je respire un peu et pour me remettre en forme, j'ai terminé la page. Et j'me relance dans ton perso prochainement. ^^
Posted by LittleSlimy 10 years ago Report
Mon perso peut attendre. Respire, prends tes reperes au boulot ... toussa toussa ^^
Posted by algog8 10 years ago Report
Will she sate her thirst, or will we run out of water first?
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
I think she'll rather run out of buckets.
Posted by algog8 10 years ago Report
And other containers?
Posted by Morphy 10 years ago Report
Drinking soapy water is bad, but also fun. You can blow bubbles, real (big) soap bubbles and not gross (tiny) spit bubbles. Granted, most soapy water also tastes horrible...
Er, no, I'm not speaking from personal experience or anything. >.>
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Hehe, yeah. But since nothing tastes bad to her, it's fine I guess. Even if it's dirty soapy water, lol. (but yeah, I speak from personnal experience and soapy water tastes terrible ! :D) (y'know, in the shower...)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
Ok, I have no Idea if this exposition dump was supposed to be completely nonses, but I think I'm gonna have to operate under that assumption.
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
You mean "nonsense" ? Well it is supposed to be the opposite D: It's supposed to clearly explain what happened previously in the whole comic... But otherwise I can't blame you to dislike story development over fun stuff development. :)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
We didn't need an explanation. At no point did I think that her hunger was abnormal... For her. She's never been full, so this explanation that emeralds make you hungrier and hornier, which they don't, is out of the blue and unnecessary.
It's like explaining that an angry guy who gets into fights all the time got into a fight one time because he drank some milk and milk some how made him angry and want to fight.
I'd just assume that it was buisness as usual without the expostion that has no basis in reality, and is therefore actualy more confusing.
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Well from my side of the table, it is. I understand that you assume that this was normal for her, but that's exactly the point of this mechanism, she's able, but not that able. Basically it's just to ground the fact that this character doesn't grow out of lust and actually can be full at some point. This was "abnormal" for her. Hell, I must be bad at character creation, but that's how I wanted to make her. :/
That's kind of her way of becoming "unstoppable". You see, I personnally don't want to picture a story where the pred eats and eats and eats and eventually eats the planet and that kinda stuff. I've seen it enough to know that I prefer when things can get out of hands, but that it can be stopped/calmed at some point and that more voracious scenarios can happen in the same storyline (because I have many more ideas with this character and others, and I don't want to make unrelated, different/parallel universe comics where everything starts back as if nothing happened before. Personnal preference here, I guess.)
And I dunno, at some point the thing is so huge that interaction between the lady and the eaten stuff becomes irrelevant to me (and by the way it is with this comic that I understood I prefered otherwise. The part with the trucks at the beginning felt overkill to me after re-reading). So that's why I prefer her to have "limits" but that if some naughty ingredient gets into the mix, something bad can happen. I like gentle preds, giantess, ladies in general, so I always try to make them able to return to their original selves. Again, personnal choice. You may still be against these, but I do think the main idea of her having limits was kinda misunderstood here, hence these few paragraphs. Hope you can enjoy the rest of the story (to come) as well. :) (spoiler : more vore)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
Well then why did you use Emeralds as your explanation? Emeralds don't have that effect in real life, or in any story I've ever heard, so explaining them like that is just confusing. You could have said that there was a secret government chemical in one of the trucks, that did that to her.
Also him just explaining why she went out of controle, is jaring and confusing when we had no idea she went out of control. How does he even know what is in and out of her control. If she had expressed concern about having lost control before hand, it would have made sense, but as it stands it was not something we were ready for, especially she goes straight back into eating as soon as she can, just makining it seem this is the way she is.
The fact that he says Genetic tests told him what she ate makes no sesne. You cant tell what someone ate by looking at their genes, blood work would have made much more sense.
Whats more I don't think anyone was under the impression that she was never going to stop.
Its just realy clunky the way it is. I thought it was a joke when I first read it.
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Well then you have to understand what I meant better : They analysed her mutant body, and found out that her (fictionnal, invented) mutations makes her interact with emeralds specially. Now, I chose emeralds because it's something that can be found in everyday life without much trouble and can be a story event element easier than a given special chemical. About her now worriying about her loss of control. She wasn't herself. And I intend to do more storylines with this character and these specifications. Also I try to move away from the classic "I'm really hungry therefore I get monstrous powers out of nowhere". I mean, it's fine in most cases, I have nothing against good vore action, but I really like it more when things have reasons. In most comics where a girl gets such abilities out of nowhere, what prevents other girls/persons of achieving the same with the same ease ? Of course it's assumed it's in "vore universes" where such things can happen for the heck of it. It's fine. But here I try to implement characters with incredible vore powers into a realistic, normal people world. Of course such a concept is gonna sound silly one way or another, but I think aside from said silliness, it does make sense. :/
But I guess I'll be done from explaining myself now, if you feel it's better for you to ignore the present and precedent pages' info dump, then do so. Can't force you to adopt my way of thinking if it makes you feel 'meh' with my content :p I'll just let you enjoy it the way you want to. =)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
Yeah. Im not one of those people who can do that. If the origional creator writes the story one way I can't dissagree and see it my own way.
Emeralds are made of Aluminum, Silicate, and Beryllium. We consume Aluminum and Silicate in small quantities all the time, Beryllium on the otherhand is something you get from dying stars, so thats a little(lot) less common. But their chemical makeup is basically identicle to rocks and dirt otherwise.
I just think that there are other Items and materials that would better explain her reciving power from them.
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Oh, well yeah, if you put it that way, I understand. That does make sense to me now. Obviously, when you know well about a subject and see it being misinterpreted, it kinda fails to entertain. I thought it was fine to put some random mechanics that I thought its foundation didn't matter much, since it's a porn comic and it's supposed to be a fun, light ride. But I have to understand that when writing science fiction (if this can be considered as such), you have to know what you are talking about because any flaws in it will disappoint people that know it better than you.
It's like for instance when I read people on Facebook laughing about a given subject, and I don't find it funny because I know more about it than they do, and well, when you know how this given thing works, this given joke about it is not really funny anymore. Same thing here, but with enjoying stuff instead of finding it funny. That said, excuse my step into the unknown, I would definitely change the Emerald with something that makes more sense, if it was not that the rest of the story is already ready to ink and that it kind of relies on it... Anyways, thanks for your thoughtful input. :)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 10 years ago Report
Yeah it's no problem. It's almost my fault at this point. I know too much random crap. It's basically to the point of having to be "It's Magic, I don't have to Explain It", or "It's Science! Wonderful Magical Science!" for me not to immeadiately be broken out of the story.
It's hilarious, I'm more willing to accept no explanation at all, then an actual explanation most of the time.
Posted by yepthatsavore 10 years ago Report
Great work man!!
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Thanks man :)
Posted by Greennyy 10 years ago Report
Drinking the soap bucket?
Posted by Debolte 10 years ago Report
Yep D: