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Alejandra makes an power play to become an entrepreneur.
This is another old story that I had mostly written a year-and-a-half ago before losing interest. Like "Advice" and "Internet Models," I'm going to say that this was an idea that was better in my head than on paper.
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Posted by Deska 10 years ago Report
Loved this one actually despite your grievances! Also a pleasure to see your work, I hope to see some more "near miss" vore. Something very compelling about a scene that keeps the question posed till the last moment! (Though we need more that falls on the other side of the fence ;3 )
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
I found the story quite entertaining.
You write "realistic porn" quite nicely.
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
I also like how Alejandra forced her will through.
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 10 years ago Report
Wow that was fun! I hope to see more of them, and I hope that Juanita likes this and wants to play some more with Alejandra.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 10 years ago Report
Hmmm, I never actually thought about doing a sequel to this one. I guess it would be interesting to see what Juanita thought.