I love this overall, but I think the pred's facial expression doesn't quite match the situation. Her dialog is great, though. It's way better than the usual "Now you will digest hahahaha" stuff I've seen.
Well, It's her first time and her first prey, so I thought I'd draw her with an enthusiastic expression that said: "ahhh, delicious!".
Also thanks I always put a lot of thought in the dialogues !! xD
You're right about the bubble of the sound effect.
About the 8th frame I didn't draw her mouth to look like she was just smiling; I made it to look like she's loudly calling out the little guy so he can hear her inside her thick belly, maybe while smiling a little, but nothing too excessive so she can look like she's concentrating in getting the guy to listen to her teasing... Too bad it doesn't make it as easy to imagine for the viewer as I intended.
Posted by 00000 10 years ago Report
I like where this is going!
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
Most varaphiles would? ^_^ The question is if you'll like it all the way to the ... end xD
Posted by Kreeyz 10 years ago Report
Nice work on this one :3
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
Thanks !! I put a lot of new techniques and effort into this one
Posted by RavenXeo 10 years ago Report
I like how you do cleavage~
The semi transparent shirt is awesome.
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
thanks !! the semitransparent shirt was an experiment, so I guess... Success !! ^^
Posted by Dage 10 years ago Report
I love this overall, but I think the pred's facial expression doesn't quite match the situation. Her dialog is great, though. It's way better than the usual "Now you will digest hahahaha" stuff I've seen.
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
Well, It's her first time and her first prey, so I thought I'd draw her with an enthusiastic expression that said: "ahhh, delicious!".
Also thanks I always put a lot of thought in the dialogues !! xD
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
You're right about the bubble of the sound effect.
About the 8th frame I didn't draw her mouth to look like she was just smiling; I made it to look like she's loudly calling out the little guy so he can hear her inside her thick belly, maybe while smiling a little, but nothing too excessive so she can look like she's concentrating in getting the guy to listen to her teasing... Too bad it doesn't make it as easy to imagine for the viewer as I intended.
Posted by momonari 10 years ago Report
Well, That's the plan !