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This is a short little story (around 2700 words) starring our new characters Reginald and Alex! I tried to make it a little more compact than my usual stuff while still retaining all the descriptions and content, and hopefully it reads just as well.
~Alexis/Rip
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Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
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Posted by Littledude 10 years ago Report
Nice story, you don't see hard vore that often in macro/micro, but it was quick and to the *point* no pun intended. Formatting made it a little difficult in some places, would recommend block paragraphs for online scroll like this.
Posted by SkitchCougar 10 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story and liked the hard vore. I'm also happy the shorter length read okay; I may do a few more stories in this format to get the hang of it.
Also, thank you for pointing out the formatting. I resubmitted the story as a word .doc, and it seems to be fixed now. That's what I get for submitting a .txt, I suppose.
Posted by Littledude 10 years ago Report
I would still recommend leaving a space between the paragraphs. Wall of text will turn people off at the first sentence fairly regularly. I have stuff in my gallery that I submitted through word if you need an example.