I have to agree with sadisticflirt about the size and shape of her stomach in panel 2, based on the position of the prey's body, but the vore action you covered more than makes up for it. I mean, first, our pred has incredible strength being able to hoist her lover's soft body up like that, and then, despite her lover's strong protests, she still manages to force her down with relative ease. Long review short, what you managed to depict here in both pages is so much win, and the expressions are spot-on. Nice work. :)
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 10 years ago Report
Breakfast in bed is always a treat, nice to see her friend going the extra mile in the relationship.
Posted by HungryScorpion 10 years ago Report
Very nice ^^
Posted by sadisticflirt 10 years ago Report
2nd panel's a bit off. the other girl's head is barely at her breasts so what's going on in her stomach?
Posted by ZRex030 10 years ago Report
Hey, Batman and Spiderman Pop figures! I like it.
Posted by B1izzardHawk 10 years ago Report
Pop figures?
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 9 years ago Report
I have to agree with sadisticflirt about the size and shape of her stomach in panel 2, based on the position of the prey's body, but the vore action you covered more than makes up for it. I mean, first, our pred has incredible strength being able to hoist her lover's soft body up like that, and then, despite her lover's strong protests, she still manages to force her down with relative ease. Long review short, what you managed to depict here in both pages is so much win, and the expressions are spot-on. Nice work. :)
Posted by B1izzardHawk 9 years ago Report
Thanks, but how about you thank the artist, this is just my commission
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 9 years ago Report
Huh... The artist comments section made it sound like you drew it. Sorry about that. ;p