Posted by ike1 10 years ago Report

Only thing that came to mind was "Ugly"

come on man, I know you can do better than this...

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

Constructive criticism usually involves a suggestion. I'm curious as to what you think would improve this picture.

Proportions? The curve of her spine? Are you simply not attracted to fat women? Color scheme? What is it that causes you to think "Ugly"?

Posted by Topazert 10 years ago Report

Well constructive criticism from me would be, that her areolas are too big when I first looked at her it looked like she was wearing a bikini top though I understand they would be stretched out from her substantial gain in body fat from her diet I dont think they get that big. A little bigger than usual, but not that big. Other than that maybe reduce the size of her breasts abit. As for praise the line work and coloring are wonderful as usual as well as your shading work to make her skin look rubbery, I don't see any physical abnormalities aside from her massive weight gain being noticeable because her arms and shoulders betray her to having originally a slighter build as well as her shins. Keep up the good art work, Clover.*smiles and gives thumbs up*

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

Thanks for the criticism, Topazert! Your analysis is quite detailed and addresses some very specific things.
In this particular case, I wasn't goin' for a realistic style, this is just a fun sketch sort of thing. It's a far deviation from the character's norm, so I'm just tryin' stuff out. But yeah, you're right. If this was all from weight gain, she'd have a waaaay bigger belly, her arms would have flab, her tail would be much more flabby too, and her boobs wouldn't get that big.

I really need to do something about her colors. I'm not exactly sure what I'm gonna use for her scheme, but I'm pretty sure it's just gonna be white/gray. Thanks for the note though! : 3

Posted by Topazert 10 years ago Report

I think the platinum colored hair suits her well, but its up to you. Glad to hear you liked my analysis.

Posted by coaster14 10 years ago Report

her proportions seem a bit off

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

They certainly are. : 3

Posted by coaster14 10 years ago Report

are they meant to be that why?

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

Yup. Was just an experiment. This is not permanent.

Posted by CGR-7 10 years ago Report

Tanya's had a lot - A LOT - building up in there. XD

Very nice, Lucky. =)

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you dig her. : 3

Posted by Xethoner 10 years ago Report

I see this picture was just criticed, even if anyone tells you the proportions dont fit or whatever, i think they are ok ;) Im perfectly fine with that picture and i realy like the idea xD. i'd like to get dirty too :P So i say Well made!

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

I'm glad you like it, but it's perfectly fine for other people to not like it. XD

But I'm always stoked to meet another scat fan. : 3

Posted by Xethoner 10 years ago Report

Yeah im realy into scat, im maybe more into scat than into vore, but im not sure about that :x So nice to meet you xD

Posted by karps 10 years ago Report

<3 <3 <3