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So, this was originally going to be a 4-part series, but now I decided to split this part in two - partially because I work on this stuff a bit erratically and I've been chipping away at this for days, and I figure you guys would rather have half of something early, than the whole thing in a potentially distant future. Also because part one was about 2,500 words, and that's around where this one was when I reached this point... I like keeping even chapters.
Anyway, long story short, this date is far from over. This part is just some stuffing fantasy.
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Posted by Argh 10 years ago Report
Absolutely your best work. You describe Jen--and the meal--so sensually, so erotically, and so completely. I absolutely love that she intends to fatten up poor, oblivious August (nice double entendre), and I hope she succeeds wildly. You've got so many things in motion for a comparatively straight-forward story, and the questions they bring up (is Phoebe a minor character or an appetizer?) are unbearably fun and sexy. Here's to a fantastic part 2, and may parts 3, 4, and 5 come quickly and easily as you wrote them.
Posted by 13master13 10 years ago Report
Glad you like it so much.
This is all aside from my real writing career, so there's less of the incentive to put too much energy into it, but the cheerleading is a good motivation to keep it in the mix and have fun with less serious projects.
I'm using this piece as a focus point in starting a new writing regiment, so hopefully, if I'm not jinxing it, the rest will be appearing throughout the next week or so.