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story I wrote please tell me of my errors, I hope you enjoy this
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Posted by The K 10 years ago Report
Other then the rape part, this was a amazing story with amazing details. I loved all the parts when Elsa burped and is rubbing her big belly. I also love how you detailed how big her belly is to the point where it's painful and she's getting a stomachache. That was a very wonderful touch. I could just picture big bellied Elsa with a bad stomachace but enjoying it at the same time. I hope you do more with pred Elsa, this was a good read.
Posted by Portal124 10 years ago Report
I was thinking about continuing this, hence the cliff hanger
Posted by The K 10 years ago Report
Great! I'd love to see one.
Posted by BubbleGumBoy 10 years ago Report
This is great :) LOVE the post-vore part ;) keep up the good work :p (maybe do another story with Elsa?)
Posted by EmissaryOfRainbows 10 years ago Report
Where'd you get the preview image from?
Posted by Portal124 10 years ago Report
I made it
Posted by Vorachist22 3 years ago Report
This is amazing.