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The case of the vanishing detectives. By wiseguy288 -- Report

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This is a sequel to  Groblek's story "Crystal gets her twins back."(http://aryion.com/g4/view/263044)

Three armature detectives investigate the disappearance of the kids from the last story. What will they find? Read and find out.

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Now I know what you're thinking. "Why did I write this sequel and not commission Groblek instead?" Well, it's sort of a tribute/nod to Groblek's work and the influence it's had on me. Basically, it's my weird way of saying 'thanks'.

Crystal, Lucy, Aurora, Amber, Sally, Pall and (despite not being named) Mrs.Winnford belong to  Max123

Veronica, Eddy, Jake, Carmen, Janice, Greg, Abby and Jake's mom belong to me.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report

Nicely done! I like the twist you added with Jake. And feel free to write sequels to any of my stories if you're inspired to do so, I take it as quite a compliment.

wiseguy288

Posted by wiseguy288 9 years ago Report

That means a lot to hear that, thank you ^^

cero89

Posted by cero89 9 years ago Report

This is nicely done

wiseguy288

Posted by wiseguy288 9 years ago Report

Thanks ^^

cero89

Posted by cero89 9 years ago Report

This is nicely done

DresdenQ

Posted by DresdenQ 9 years ago Report

well done, feels like Groblek's prose, and I like the Jake twist, fits perfectly

wiseguy288

Posted by wiseguy288 9 years ago Report

Thanks ^^ That means a lot to hear that X3