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This is really just brainstorming the concept. Each of the four scenes is meant to highlight a different part.
The first is how the mind control works, which was something I puzzled over since I wanted something different. A Power Rangers/Sentai toy fit the bill well, especially one where a running gag can be everyone admitting how fun it is to play with.
The second was a character interaction piece, since yes the mind control is key but at the same time this will explore the ‘now what?’ aspect. Each woman increases the pressure on Ishmael to support them. Each also has to find their own job and adapt to being in a different world. Juniper’s bit at the end is a bit of ecchi comedy, but in a way where it makes sense.
Third is same day as the second, and more interaction; how does each person react to watching Gurren Lagann? And then Ishmael asks if he can snuggle with Juniper when they go to bed since a key part is that even once the mind control is set and unbreakable he still respects them.
Fourth is where most of the group is completed and one of my ideas for what happens after; he has Valentine and Crimson Viper make a fitness regimen for him that he follows. The end highlights how he reacts when he can touch and not just look when they’re dressed. He wants to, but refuses to just take it since that’s not sexytimes, that’s rape. So if they offer and let him, he’s happy. If not, he doesn’t fret; he cannot take what should be given both mentally and as part of how the MC works...
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This is something I'm working on as a sort of 'we've all seen it, let's just take it seriously' deal.
It's a mind control story but I'm taking into account that you choose who you mind control based on characters you like. So that's being worked in so they're not robots. I know who the fourth is but she isn't in any scenes because I haven't done research on her yet. But she is both a character I like and visually counters Viper in skintone and hair color.
And yes, Valentine will be a teasing troll for the entire story once she's added.
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Posted by bladeson_X 9 years ago Report
Not bad.