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I think it's writers block, because my mind is juggling other implications since my accident. The idea of having this writers block makes my skin crawl and perhaps I may not get out of it until I am walking on my own two feet normally again.

I am going to make a sequel to "A Midnight Snack", I am titling it "A Midnight Miracle", and heres the first few sentences

"Yvonne, Had just made a meal of her lover Vance. Taking pride in dominating the man she loved. As he served her hunger and he himself quelled her appetite, Her abdomen rotund now with his whole being held by her stomach. Vance was inside her. Yvonne was softly sleeping."

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report

A very evocative scene, quite well done.

Uxirusu

Posted by Uxirusu 9 years ago Report

Thanks, I feel that my short stories could be cohesive were I to reuse the characters in every tale

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report

That makes sense - this one very much feels like part of something ongoing. It would be good to see how Theodore got inside Lillian in the first place, since you've tagged this as unbirth.

Uxirusu

Posted by Uxirusu 9 years ago Report

I intended to start with the sex, and progress to theo's life in the womb, lilly's life being pregnant, then end how it started since I've done an unbirth story before. I got a writers block, maybe because my car accident and work accident.