Posted by Suibelly 9 years ago Report

This was a nice story, I hope to see more from you involving pregnant prey in the future.

The first person perspective of the prey was a nice touch as well.

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Posted by Naganommer 9 years ago Report

Aww, Thank you. I don't have any ideas for stories involving Pregnant prey right now but that could always change change in the future.

First person perspective is almost exclusively used in my Ty stories weather he's a pred (not likely) or a prey. and there's definitely going to be more of him in the future.

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Posted by voidrunner 5 years ago Report

I have to say, I'm a bit confused. At one point, it's said that they are lovers, then that the lamia's daughter was in love with Ty, (still not sure if she was really Havas' daughter, as can't see a mother calling their daughter a bitch) then she said that you shouldn't think of them as people, (her own lover) but food.

Keep in mind, this isn't me criticizing, I loved the story, just confused is all.

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Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report

Havas isn't a great person. She's meant to be borderline abusive and a little unstable in this story. The only reason she kept Tyia around was because it was convenient for her.

Havas really is Ana's mother but I didn't really want to overplay that aspect of their relationship. She was trying to mentor her daughter to be a better predator and the whole calling her a bitch thing was just her acting on impulse and doing what was most pleasurable instead of what was best for her relationship with her daughter.

Also I didn't make it explicit but Tyia's been kind of brainwashed by Havas. That's why he was so in love with her.

Hope that clears it up. I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted by voidrunner 5 years ago Report

^^

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