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Another chapter brought to you by my most meticulous co-writer Vraddock. He asks me to ask you viewers if you wouldn't mind giving your thoughts on Yellowcake, our ghoulish friend. And these choices also come in the form of speech choices, like in the game. Heh. But speaking of choices...
Possible Choices:
1 - “Got to say, I'm a little curious about it all actually. Mind enlightening me?”
2 - “Thanks for the offer, but I'm just here to drop Yellowcake off then head up to Dodge.”
3 - “I really like your mane!”
4 - “Nope, food delivery! You ordered a Stable Mare with light Rad poisoning, right?”
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 9 years ago Report
2 to continue the story. And 4 for bad ending. Hope we see Zeph again...
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 9 years ago Report
Also, as nice as yellowcame is, I get the feeling that if he sticks around too long, there are a few situations we might find ourselves in; A.) he might go feral and eat us in our sleep, or we have to go through the trauma of putting him down like pony old yeller; and B.) many ponies have a distrust of ghoul ponies, so he will make it harder for us to get places. Just a thought. I like him, I really do, but do the benefits of keeping him out-weigh the risks? That remains to be seen.
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 9 years ago Report
Sorry, I wrote that on my iPhone, andit autocorrected his name wrong
Posted by YourGenericBrony 9 years ago Report
2
Posted by scootaloorulez1997 9 years ago Report
2
Posted by Softpony 9 years ago Report
Probably option 2 here. As for Yellowcake, he's a nice enough pony, but I can't imagine it ending well if he follows us. He'll go feral eventually, right? I don't want to have to put him down after getting attached.
Plus, I know this is super shallow, but there's sort of a lot of sex in this story and I can't imagine a walking corpse as anything other than a mood killer. Nice pony, and in a different kind of story I might have liked to have him along, but not if we're going to read about ghoul sex.
Nice chapter! Looking forward to more.
Posted by IronGhostXLII 9 years ago Report
4 for fun
Maybe 1 or 2
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
1
Posted by steelbrony13 9 years ago Report
4 for an interesting bad end that might involve coffee pot mating with yellowcake as their meals are digested.
2 for continuing the story though
Posted by CaptainMoke 9 years ago Report
Gotta go 2
Posted by CaptainMoke 9 years ago Report
Gotta go 2
Posted by Exilo 9 years ago Report
4 for the interesting bad end, 3 for the funny one, 2 for the story progression. And potentially 1 for a Good(?) End.