It's a neat picture, and you did a good job of trying to catch the "chibi" idea PQ had, which is what this story is set in. If I can make one small critique, Fuuka is certainly balled up as she was in the story, but you put in a lot of empty space in the stomach itself. You may have been better served in having just a big stomach that you can't see through, and the small bit where Fuuka is see-through.
Yeeaaaaaah I was mostly experimenting with the belly in this one, I like to draw my bellies really round but that's a bit weird to do with vore. Thanks for your critique ^^ I'll definitely try that out sometime
Posted by CGR-7 9 years ago Report
Well, Fuuka, it looks like you're gonna have to head south in you wanna get out. XD
Posted by CGR-7 9 years ago Report
*if you
Posted by Wolfwood 9 years ago Report
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Posted by bambeeboo 9 years ago Report
turn that card right side up yo
Posted by Negator 9 years ago Report
It's a neat picture, and you did a good job of trying to catch the "chibi" idea PQ had, which is what this story is set in. If I can make one small critique, Fuuka is certainly balled up as she was in the story, but you put in a lot of empty space in the stomach itself. You may have been better served in having just a big stomach that you can't see through, and the small bit where Fuuka is see-through.
Good pic overall though. :)
Posted by bambeeboo 9 years ago Report
Yeeaaaaaah I was mostly experimenting with the belly in this one, I like to draw my bellies really round but that's a bit weird to do with vore. Thanks for your critique ^^ I'll definitely try that out sometime