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Okay, so here's the part I've been trying to write for almost two weeks now... and yeah, it definitely wasn't worth all that time. Just been in a funk with my writing and all. I at least hope you all enjoy this.
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 9 years ago Report
Loved it! Changelings make fun preds.
Posted by CaptainMoke 9 years ago Report
More than I had hoped for. Great job
Posted by Jeschke 9 years ago Report
The funny thing about being in a funk is, often enough, the audience doesn't notice it affect your work a whole lot. Or at least, that's been my experience a good few times. x3
Anyway, I liked reading this, what happened was a good mixture of unexpected-but-kinda-expected, and then the obvious outcome of those events at the end x3 Was a nice read and all.
Do hope you get out of your funk soon though. And hopefully it's not anxiety from feeling like you aren't writing well, cause I've been reading since the beginning and enjoying it since the beginning too. x3 Kind of want to do my own sort of interactive like this sometime, even. But yeah, take care of yourself and hopefully feel better. :3
Posted by Speedyblupi 9 years ago Report
No disposal ending...
Aww :(
Posted by TheCrystalDemon 9 years ago Report
I feel like if this was a game, that death would be an achievement.
Like how in portal 2 there are two ways to die to get achievements
Loved this chapter!
Posted by atak 9 years ago Report
Lovely that the changeling got to slurp at Dusty's tailhole a while, must have been a lovely few moments for her :3
Posted by Gone 8 years ago Report
Looks like you predicted Thorax before he was even in the show.
Just kidding, but I'm re-reading Act 1. Awesome work~