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Prize for RavenXeo !! ( One day I decided to count who had commented the most in my last 5 pictures and it was him !! )
Comment if you like !! remember: this picture could be counted on my next sudden "comment contest" !!
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Posted by NekoYuki 8 years ago Report
What's the sparkling around her head on the first panel? She looks either dazed or its some form of magical residue/particle effect
Posted by RavenXeo 8 years ago Report
I would say both residual magic and excitement~
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
That would be pure excitement !! xD
Posted by RavenXeo 8 years ago Report
ahh~ She looks so good<3
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
I'm glad you like it !! ^_^
Posted by Kreeyz 8 years ago Report
Cute one :D
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
Thanks ! It's my first time trying to draw a giantess city rampage scenario
Posted by Gelenor 8 years ago Report
Gonna have to say she is the cuttest giantess i have ever seen.
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
I know !!! That Katie is one hell of a cute OC ! She's one of RavenXeo's Original character, also it looks like he put a little background story on the picture at his gallery
Posted by luckyB 8 years ago Report
hmm...mm.. yummy crowd :P Strangely enough, just by the word she say was excite me enough.. I wonder why? -w- keep up the good work!
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
Well, I was just trying to make her sound like RavenXeo told me she should sound, but in the end the dialogue was up to me; so I'm glad to hear I did a good job !!
Posted by jackson22222 8 years ago Report
Well, at least they had the manors to gather for her.
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
Naw, all building are too simple and square and ugly to be manors !! I'm just a newbie at drawing cities !!! xD
It's my first time trying to draw a giantess city rampage scenario
Posted by jackson22222 8 years ago Report
I can't believe I misspelled manners (Though I have a feeling you knew what I meant :). That said, for your first time with this scenario, ya done good.
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
Thanks !!! Actually, I didn't have a clue !! xD
Actually they're trying to run away!! you can notice in panel #1 specially by the people on the sides of the street... I guess I should have drawn the eyes so you could tell the direction they were facing (noted).
In frame #2 she caught them somehow, but RavenXeo and I only had a total of 6 pannels to give you the entire story, so we cut the part where she manages to grab them !! xD
Posted by jackson22222 8 years ago Report
Ah, well I figured they were running in the first panel based on the silhouettes, but then they seemed to be relatively neutral as they seemed to simply stand there on her hands without much expression, so I figured that they were just the few she found that hadn't run away. I would recommend drawing some lines to indicate quivering, or even really simple scared or sad eyes, as that alone can make a notable difference. I figured the red lines might indicate that, but then I thought they could also indicate excitement, so I wasn't sure. Then again, that is just my thoughts on the matter based on observations, so I could very well be wrong. Still, these are just some minor things that I noticed in a piece that I quite liked.
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
Well, the red lines are because they are protesting... they are relatively still because they are afraid of falling from such an elevated height... But you are right, if the readers dont understand, then its simply not clear enough, thanks for the pointer !
Posted by The_Prof 8 years ago Report
looks like Xeo has a good choice in girls.
Also this means I have to be a lot more commenty
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
Yup, I really liked RavenXeo 's OC !! Oh! Just in case you didnt read my last blog entry (which you should if you want to win) Im also counting comment content for the next contest, not just quantity; useful critical tips will probably bag people the most points !!
Posted by The_Prof 8 years ago Report
bah I'm no good at critiquing... But I suppose if I were to say something outside of the previously mentioned simple buildings I'd say that you may want to work on drawing to the vanishing point in the first panel... Distancing seems a little wonky...
Granted yes I am in no means using the proper technical terms but you get the gist of it