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So we have another, if it isn't clear I have a large leaning toward unbirth. But I do not like the fatal kind. I am more of a safe vore kind of voreaphile. transformation is another thing I am not to against

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Dark_phoenix

Posted by Dark_phoenix 9 years ago Report

Well.. now I feel like a jerk...
It's definitely better.

Still a bit stunted with the perspective.. Toothless' dad send her off with her dragon?

I feel it could have been combined with the first chapter.. but maybe that's just me.


MMPluc

Posted by MMPluc 9 years ago Report

The start is Hiccup's recap on what happened in the first one. So in a way it could be done. I will have to think on it. After that I had to have them leave for a short time. And the perspective I forgot to change so yeah...