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So this is the after affects of the unbirth, this time it is of her just healing him. Also contains HTTYD Changes, the fixing of her transformation

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Dark_phoenix

Posted by Dark_phoenix 9 years ago Report

It's starts out well but it's over so quick..
I want to like it but it feel it just misses so many marks..

Dark_phoenix

Posted by Dark_phoenix 9 years ago Report

The stories feel like you are on the right track, the intent is there, the potential is there.

If I am being overly negative it is because I see that this story can really shine, it just needs a little more effort.

MMPluc

Posted by MMPluc 9 years ago Report

I may revisit these again on the weekend. Either that or write another chapter in the next few days. As for being too short. I wrote them all in a bit of haste so I could upload them all.